As Solitude Rains

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As the sunset of life beckons me
in marmalade farewells, orange sherbet adieus,
I stroll in uneven footsteps,
not sure of the bridges I crossed
or those burned in the process

Alone I follow the polished pebbles
scattered along this lethargic path,
nary a word or whisper, only my thoughts 
peering back on what was,
stumbling when your memory finds me

Dark tangerine hints touch the sky 
for the day, this day, my life
shall soon disappear beyond the slumbering valley,
diminishing into a minute speck
hiding in plain sight where no one can see or care

I listen unsuccessfully for its sad melody
of fractured bar chords and minor notes
when I again feel you invading my soul,
reaching down from my heart,
the place you still reside

Inaudible tones offer I am sorry for the pain,
the weight I did not realize I carried,
collections of hurt in shiny bows and pretty paper
that sent you away from me,
as solitude now rains in gift-wrapped droplets

Softer my dampened steps move
towards that straight line illusion summoning,
darker still as minutes pass
for I know this end is mine alone 
as the moon crests the horizon and I slowly fade away


For the Silence poetry contest
Sponsored by: Silent One
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Sands Avatar
September 7, 2019 at 8:16 AM
Congratulations for your top win with this amazing poem, Chris :)
Green Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 12:26 PM
Thank you my friend. : )
Faulkner Avatar
September 6, 2019 at 10:28 AM
Congratulations on your win, this is so stirring, especially the haunting last two lines-
Green Avatar
September 6, 2019 at 10:53 AM
Thank you so very much Michelle. I am happy you liked this.
Andresen Avatar
September 6, 2019 at 5:44 AM
- Congratulations on your top win, Chris :) - hugs and happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)
Green Avatar
September 6, 2019 at 7:36 AM
Thank you so much my friend
Hamilton Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 9:53 PM
Wow another win congrats dear poet, you are now definitely the belle of the ball. lol
Green Avatar
September 6, 2019 at 7:36 AM
Ha, thanks John. I don't know about that but I appreciate your kind words.
Mcgee Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 5:22 PM
As solitude rains in gift wrapped droplets...love that line especially! Congrats on your win.
Green Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 5:25 PM
Thank you so very much Jeanne for your kind words on my poem.
Y. Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 4:16 PM
Wow! Chris, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your top win. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis
Green Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 5:25 PM
Thank you so very much Alexis. I really appreciate you stopping by today
Adams Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 3:46 PM
I knew this one was worthy of first place ..it wowed me in its beauty. Congrats Chris. Awesome win :)
Green Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 3:49 PM
I was just about to say the same thing to you. : ) Thank you so much my friend.
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 3:02 PM
Chris, this gorgeous poem deserves its first place honor! It is written so beautifully it is going into my Faves! Congratulations my friend! : ) xxoo
Green Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 3:11 PM
Thank you Connie, so very much. I am so happy you liked this one. Your kind words are always a wonderful gift to me.
One Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 2:53 PM
The imagery in this is just great... you explained a broken heart very well... congratulations on first place in the contest..
Green Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 2:57 PM
Thank you so very much. It was a fun contest to write for and I am honored to have placed so high.
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 31, 2019 at 12:02 AM
This is fantastic Chris! I am betting I will see this at the top. You raised the bar very high! Excellent my friend. xxoo
Green Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 9:22 AM
Thank you Connie. I always smile when you stop by my page. I appreciate you my friend.
Y. Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 4:48 PM
Wow! Chris, What a good entry for the contest theme. I enjoyed the title and content. You have a way with words and you know how to use them." Inaudible tones offer I am sorry for the pain" was a good line. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Excellent job:-) Alexis
Green Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 4:57 PM
Thank you Alexis, it means a lot to me when you stop by to read. I appreciate you my friend.
There Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 3:00 PM
I can feel the weight of this as the most beautiful sunset leads to your darkest day. And all I want to do is add something... anything... to ease the silence! Great job portraying it ~
Green Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 3:31 PM
I think you just did with your wonderful comment. Thank you so much, I really wasn't too sure about this one, but now it doesn't seem so bad. I appreciate your visit today.
Adams Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 2:03 PM
Wow. Love the imagery you sewn into this piece, I can feel the fades of life as it echoes in the solitude... great entry for the contest in my opinion :) hugs
Green Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 3:29 PM
Thanks so much Sandy. I struggled with this and I'm still not sure it meets the theme, but it sounded quiet as I was writing it. : )
Chiri Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 2:02 PM
Wow chris stunning once again!;)
Green Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 3:29 PM
Thanks so much Brenda. I am happy you liked this one.
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