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As long as I see the sky

In the bright sky - I can see your heavenly face watching over me

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/2/2024 10:08:00 AM

"1 Place" As long as I see the sky~Date Written:11/5/2024~Human Written By Poet

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/30/2024 9:47:00 AM

A very comforting one. Congrats, Paula

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/2/2024 11:28:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your Congratulations. Glad you found my Monoku write to be A very comforting one. Have a fun day..................

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/29/2024 6:28:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning line, Paula :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/2/2024 11:27:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my Monoku write. Hugs... Have a fun day...............

thriveni c mysore

Date: 11/28/2024 6:41:00 PM

congratulations dear poet. cheerful as always, lovely positive write. cheers.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/2/2024 11:26:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your Congratulations. Glad you found my Monoku write to be a lovely positive write. Have a fun day..................

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/18/2024 12:11:00 AM

A wonderful Monoku which leaves me with a comforting safe feeling of God's eternal love And Him watching all of us from his celestial perfect heavenly home. Hugs, blessings, Jennifer.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/2/2024 11:24:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you found my Monoku write to be A wonderful Monoku. He watches over us all the time. Hugs... Have a fun day..................

Karen Jones

Date: 11/16/2024 8:54:00 PM

So reassuring of His grace and love. Great poem!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/2/2024 11:21:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you found my Monoku write to be a Great poem. Have a fun day..................

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/16/2024 8:47:00 AM

That is a good reminder that He watches over us. Lovely faith poem my friend. love phyl

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/2/2024 11:20:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my Monoku write. Yes, a good reminder that He watches over us all the time. Have a fun day...............

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 11/12/2024 1:44:00 PM

I love this poem of Faith.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/13/2024 1:19:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you love my Monoku write. Have a fun autumn day...............

Paul Bell

Date: 11/11/2024 2:46:00 AM

It's a great thought, smiling eyes are looking down on you.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/12/2024 8:45:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you found my Monoku write to be a great thought. Have a fun autumn day..................

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/10/2024 8:02:00 AM

languid and totally uplifting! your monoku delights as i send you winning wishes,.paula!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/12/2024 8:43:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your winning wishes. Glad you enjoyed my Monoku write. Have a fun autumn day...............

Len Gasun

Date: 11/10/2024 5:00:00 AM

So beautiful and heart warming my dear poet friend Paula. All the best in the contest. Thanks for sharing. I love it and enjoyed. Have a wonderful day in sunshine. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/12/2024 8:41:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for All the best in the contest. Glad you love and enjoyed my Monoku write. Thanks for your kind words. Hugs... Have a fun autumn day...............

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/9/2024 10:43:00 PM

Precious words

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/12/2024 8:27:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my Monoku write. Have a fun autumn day...............

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 11/9/2024 9:52:00 PM

So touching and lovely! A wonderful poem. Best wishes for the contest.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/12/2024 8:26:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your Best wishes for the contest. Glad you found my Monoku write to be So touching and lovely! A wonderful poem. Have a fun autumn day..................

Joe Dimino

Date: 11/9/2024 12:27:00 PM

We see with heart even more than with our eyes. Lovely read!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/12/2024 8:22:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you found my Monoku write to be a Lovely read. Have a fun autumn day..................

Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/9/2024 10:36:00 AM

What a beautiful and ultimately comforting thought, Paula. I love the way you see past the obvious and into the eternal! Best wishes for the contest. Sending you blessings of autumn joy!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/9/2024 11:51:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your Best wishes for the contest. Glad you found my Monoku write to be beautiful. Blessings to you... Have a fun autumn day..................

Hiya Sharma

Date: 11/9/2024 9:42:00 AM

Oh my, this says so much... what an evocative and soul-stirring monoku you've woven dear Paula! In the warmth of sun and beneath the soft dreams of moon ~ we can surely feel the caress of God and our loved ones. Adored reading this! Sending you best wishes and light always ~

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/9/2024 11:48:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you enjoyed my Monoku write. Your kind words put a smile on my heart. Thanks... Have a fun autumn day...............

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/7/2024 5:02:00 AM

Lovely!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/7/2024 11:05:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you found my Monoku write to be Lovely. I love the pretty sky both day/night. Guess we need to look up more. We are never alone. Have a fun autumn day...............

Emilia James

Date: 11/6/2024 12:23:00 PM

Your Monoku gives such a lovely and warm feeling Paula. Good luck in the contest. Emilia : )

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/7/2024 11:02:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your Good luck in the contest. Glad you enjoyed my Monoku Sky write. I love the sky both day/night. The full moon is always so pretty... Have a fun autumn day...............

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/6/2024 11:31:00 AM

- Wonderful feeling, Paula :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/7/2024 11:00:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your GL in the contest. Glad you enjoyed my Monoku write. I love the sky. It was fun to write. Hugs.... Have a fun autumn day...............

Ink Empress

Date: 11/5/2024 10:10:00 PM

Awwn this is so sweet and soulful dear sweet paula, i feel the same especially on starry skies and more, feel like God is always with us, guiding us we are never alone. Sending you light always ~

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/7/2024 10:58:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you found my Monoku write to be so sweet and soulful. Yes, the starry skies do feel like God is always with us. He is watching over us. Just look up, we are never alone. Have a fun autumn day...............

Michael Tor

Date: 11/5/2024 4:47:00 PM

I like this version of what you see in the sky Paula it is refreshing to include our Lord. Great entry... Hugs.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/7/2024 10:54:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my Monoku write. The Lord is watching down on us, day/night. I love the sky. Hugs... Have a fun autumn day...............

David Kavanagh

Date: 11/5/2024 3:30:00 PM

Nice work Paula, the heavens watch over us all, you have painted a beautiful spiritual picture here, all the best for contest, might be no harm checking out the rules with the sponsor, I took it we’re supposed to open the monoku with the prompt, cheers David

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/7/2024 10:45:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you found my Monoku write to be Nice work. Yes, the heavens watch over us. Thanks for the tip. Cheers to you on this Thursday/enjoy it..... Have a fun autumn day...............