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As If She Rose With the Sun

She knew how to laugh To find adventure each day Just a child, she loved to play She reached out her hand Come on let’s go, she would say Off we ran across the land As if it were there Forever for us to have To be ours everywhere But, she did not know She would be taken from it Without any chance to grow A friend left behind No longer a hand to hold Only her spirit, to find Many miles to run Searching just to hear her laugh As if she rose with the sun Heidi Sands 11/30/17 Placed joint 1st in the Standard 180 poetry contest. Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Date: 2/20/2019 3:55:00 PM
Back with congrats on your win, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/20/2019 4:13:00 PM
Thank you Vijay :)
Date: 2/19/2019 6:02:00 AM
Fantastic write, Heidi!:-) Heartiest congratulations on your win!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/19/2019 7:38:00 AM
Thank you very much Edward! :)
Date: 12/1/2017 2:11:00 PM
- Memories ... touching, Heidi ... "Without any chance to grow" ... - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/1/2017 2:17:00 PM
Thank you for your visit and comment Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/1/2017 9:21:00 AM
Losing a friend is so sad and yes the spirit does remain, a lovely poem, Heidi, Happy Friday!!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/1/2017 11:52:00 AM
Hi Mike. Thank you for your visit and comment. Happy Friday ! :)
Date: 11/30/2017 8:45:00 PM
A sad yet beautiful write Heidi..her memory lives on..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/30/2017 9:03:00 PM
Thank you. Yes :)
Date: 11/30/2017 5:46:00 PM
So tender! I love the title. I love her present spirit "as if she rose with the sun."
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/30/2017 5:48:00 PM
Thank you so much Sunlite :)
Date: 11/30/2017 5:03:00 PM
A depiction of two friends separated..effectively done!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/30/2017 5:20:00 PM
Thank you Vijay :)

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