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As I Rest In Peace

As I rest in peace tranquil in my grave I wait for flowers he vowed his tears brush my soul.... Senryu- 5/7/5 Written August 4th, 2015 © Dr. Upma A. Sharma Entered for contest "Must be read" Sponsor- Silent one Awarded 4th place

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Date: 11/25/2015 10:28:00 PM
A sad but lovely senryu! Congrats on your win, Upma! Love, Kim
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Date: 11/24/2015 3:10:00 AM
Dr Upma, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Love SKAT
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Date: 11/21/2015 6:41:00 PM
My friend, congrats on your win!!
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Date: 8/6/2015 2:20:00 PM
Sad heartfelt Senryu Dr.Upma, takes me to the scene, James..
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Date: 8/5/2015 2:20:00 AM
Dr. Upma, this touched me... Hope all is well..hugs ~Olive Eloisa
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Date: 8/4/2015 10:46:00 PM
I think our lost loved ones are just resting and waiting until we join them one day... A very soulful and heartfelt write that expresses so much in so few lines. Nicely penned, Dr. Upma!
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Date: 8/4/2015 7:41:00 PM
very sad upma? [you ok?] Light & Love
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Date: 8/4/2015 6:12:00 PM
A poignant one!
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Date: 8/4/2015 3:49:00 PM
Upma, oh so deep and dark and beautiful. Thanks for visiting my poem, 53 bells
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Date: 8/4/2015 3:22:00 PM
Good senryu Dr Upma. it is hard for the one standing above. I love the first line. NATE
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Date: 8/4/2015 1:11:00 PM
Deep in meaning... pain of death and promise kept...nice.... Death is a mysterious thing.... Nice Senryu:-) Love, Anulaxmi
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Date: 8/4/2015 11:26:00 AM
Powerful! This moved me! Death is a sad part of life! Rated 7!
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