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As I Close the Shop At the End of the Day

The sun is setting The afternoon is ending The store is empty A few cars parked on the street I'm content, this is complete

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/21/2009 3:13:00 PM
Nice way to close the day. Such a peaceful poem. I enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind words on my cinquain. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 5/20/2009 11:35:00 PM
and then after a day hearing people's needs ,its time for your need,a coffee break and some poetry,great poetry--wonderfully penned--charma
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Date: 5/20/2009 9:22:00 PM
A very satisfying sense of closure at the end of a work day, Jim. How nice it is to know our work is done and we can relax as "The sun is setting." Great work! Love, Carolyn
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