As the Day Shuts Down

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An angel sheds a feather and mortal eyes rise to see a glimpse of divinity, as pink shards fracture blue skies. Ethereal wisps of light color misty clouds of white, imbuing fragility with exceptional beauty. Scarlet and crimson ribbons inseparably tangled, dance a sensual ballet that's choreographed by time. In the stillness of twilight silence imposes itself, in a muted harmony of sounds as the day shuts down. (Blank Verse) 4/9/2017

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Line Gauthier

Date: 5/23/2018 1:43:00 PM

Beautiful imagery, Emile.

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/24/2018 7:03:00 AM

Thanks Line, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.

Edward Mccall

Date: 4/13/2017 11:20:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful Emile, what stunning imagery. You have painted a delightful portrait of twilight with your words. in it goes

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/13/2017 11:25:00 AM

Thank you Edward, I appreciate your encouragement and support. Emile.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/10/2017 9:56:00 AM

Good Morning Emile. Words that come to mind are elegant beautiful imagery stunning gentle and more. This is fine poetry in wonderful form and expression. Well done entirely. This was a pleasure to read.

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/10/2017 10:06:00 AM

Thanks you so much Lisa, I welcome your comments and appreciate your support, Emile.