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Cherry Trees

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leaves burst mauve palette...
as cherry trees swirl with breeze
on afternoon's glaze

boughs drape Maytime's field
adorned in chiffon-sheet gowns…
a town's procession


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(( for Carol Brown's " What's the Buzz" ))

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Kash Poet

Date: 3/11/2011 8:18:00 AM

Congrats Nette on your another win!!!--kashinath

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/10/2011 3:58:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Elaine George

Date: 3/10/2011 12:16:00 PM

I knew this was a winner the first time I read it Nette. Simply Beautiful! Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie

John Freeman

Date: 3/10/2011 10:29:00 AM

Such a pleasure to see you dear one, nette near the top with this worthy third place beauty. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/10/2011 9:28:00 AM

So happy to see your poem in the winners' circle, Nette. Would you believe the cherry trees bloom at the beginning of February in north Florida? I know that is not true for most places, but it has always amazed me how early spring comes here. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/10/2011 6:18:00 AM

Congratulations on the win in my contest Nette. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol

Tahera Mannan

Date: 3/10/2011 12:13:00 AM

ring ring a roses. wow nette. many congrats dear friend.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/9/2011 8:09:00 PM

Congrats on your "ring-a-roses" win with this charming piece. BG

Ray Dillard

Date: 3/9/2011 6:26:00 PM

Congratulations, Nette, on this nice entry! RAY

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 3/9/2011 5:08:00 PM

congratulations to you Nette. real nice

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/9/2011 4:10:00 PM

What a beautiful time. Great write, great win. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/9/2011 2:30:00 PM

Congrats Nette dear friend on your super cool win in Carol's contest with this expressive and energetic entry luv.. enjoy another chart topping poem and win...

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/9/2011 2:22:00 PM

Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of Carol, nette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/9/2011 2:07:00 PM

Congratulations, Nette and I am happy to be able to go thru the list and review ALL these awsome haiku!!

James Fraser

Date: 3/6/2011 6:14:00 AM

When I close my eyes after reading this lovely Haiku set, I can hear the moments captured by your fine words Nette, just lovely. Have a wonderful Sunday....:)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/3/2011 12:13:00 PM

What delightful descriptions of spring activities, Nette. It won't be long before we see the children withtheir hoses and the trees bursting with blooms. Great use of the rhyme to enhance the flow of your haiku. Wishing you success in Carol's contest, dear. I think she'll really like this one! Love, Carolyn

Kash Poet

Date: 3/2/2011 9:08:00 PM

How wonderfully you have rhymed the string Haiku here ,nette!beautiful imagery!Winning wishes--kashinath

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/2/2011 5:30:00 AM

Well this is magnificent Nette and your rhyme is superb my friend.. much success in Carol's contest though this is a definite chart topping piece luv.. very expressive and luv the last verse .. ring ring a roses... recalling my own childhood days luv..