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Apology

For forty years , I wallowed in self-pity ; for my lost LOVE -- LENORE Physically , emotionally , mentally: heart, body, soul ALL --- I Winter snow, spring rains, summer heat, fall breezes YOU ---- LOVE I have read the poems of poets past and poetry soup POETS --- YOU There are many poets that understand it is not all about I ------- STILL I post my comments, I read them to, I’m a newbie, I LEARN -- MY Poetry Soup poets are very kind I love all of them all SO --- HEART Experience and knowledge And talent at poetry soup: MUCH --- HAS LENORE used verse the soup poets: where idea comes FROM -- FOUND YOU --- ANOTHER I’m --- HER SORRY : -- NAME FOR ---- IS WHAT ---- JILL I ----- SHE PUT -- CAUGHT YOU ---- MY THROUGH HEART FORGIVE ME

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Date: 1/5/2012 7:44:00 PM
What a wonderful great and unique poem! It is indeed very enlightening and interesting the way you structure some of these poems. Excellent one. Always, Laura
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Date: 5/14/2009 7:07:00 AM
HG Great love shows in this poem. Good work. I hope you have or will be able to feel real love's joy. Imaginary love is perfect. Real love is not. But it is better. Love, Dane
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Date: 12/8/2008 6:33:00 AM
I'm newer to Poetry Soup than some of the others...but reading some of your poems,I have come to know your journey & pain.It is understandable,but friends here on PS are so kind,I'm sure they have been a wonderful source of comfort.Now..reading this poem, I am so happy for this new love, and to know that a void in your life is now filled with someone named Jill..how wonderful that is! You deserve to be happy, and that's what your dear wife,Lenore would want for you! God Bless Best Wishes!~Carrie
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Date: 12/7/2008 7:49:00 PM
Hello, my new friend. I find your poetry so very interesting..there is always a new twist to keep things interesting. Glad you liked my ABC..wow, thats a hard form..it took me forever. Ok. Ill do another if youll do a Nonet. no time limit..your choice of topic. BTW tell me about your name..what do I call you? BG
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