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Apology

For forty years , I wallowed in self-pity ; for my lost LOVE -- LENORE
Physically , emotionally , mentally: heart, body, soul  ALL ---         I
Winter snow, spring rains, summer heat, fall breezes  YOU ----   LOVE
 I have read the poems of poets past and poetry soup POETS ---   YOU
There are many poets that understand it is not all about  I -------   STILL
I post my comments, I read them to, I’m a newbie,  I LEARN  --   MY
Poetry Soup poets are very kind I love all of them all  SO      --- HEART
Experience and knowledge And talent at poetry soup:  MUCH  ---   HAS
LENORE used verse the soup poets: where idea comes  FROM  --   FOUND
                                                                                                        YOU  ---  ANOTHER
                                                                                                          I’m   ---       HER
                                                                                                        SORRY :  --  NAME
                                                                                                             FOR   ----     IS
                                                                                                            WHAT  ----   JILL
                                                                                                               I    -----    SHE
                                                                                                              PUT   -- CAUGHT
                                                                                                               YOU  ----    MY
                                                                                                           THROUGH    HEART
                                                                                                                FORGIVE   ME

Copyright © Hgarvey Daniel Esquire | Year Posted 2008

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Laura Breidenthal Date: 1/5/2012 7:44:00 PM What a wonderful great and unique poem! It is indeed very enlightening and interesting the way you structure some of these poems. Excellent one. Always, Laura Login to Reply

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Date: 5/14/2009 7:07:00 AM HG Great love shows in this poem. Good work. I hope you have or will be able to feel real love's joy. Imaginary love is perfect. Real love is not. But it is better. Love, Dane Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 12/8/2008 6:33:00 AM I'm newer to Poetry Soup than some of the others...but reading some of your poems,I have come to know your journey & pain.It is understandable,but friends here on PS are so kind,I'm sure they have been a wonderful source of comfort.Now..reading this poem, I am so happy for this new love, and to know that a void in your life is now filled with someone named Jill..how wonderful that is! You deserve to be happy, and that's what your dear wife,Lenore would want for you! God Bless Best Wishes!~Carrie Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 12/7/2008 7:49:00 PM Hello, my new friend. I find your poetry so very interesting..there is always a new twist to keep things interesting. Glad you liked my ABC..wow, thats a hard form..it took me forever. Ok. Ill do another if youll do a Nonet. no time limit..your choice of topic. BTW tell me about your name..what do I call you? BG Login to Reply