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Apologies To August

Yes, I have called you callous Garish and imperious An inconvenient glare Cracking apart the shadows of my sleep The insistent inconsistency Of the besieging and retreating heat In your smoke stained fingers Your blistering love peeling My patience, my humor and The back of my neck Yet also, I have watched My windows grow more golden In the bask of your benevolence Pouring your glory into Precisely trimmed squares On my kitchen floor Your manes of wheaten hills Crowning the coming harvest With luxurious grain So I will forgive Your sultry swagger Your stifling autocracy As these dog days close in For you are also The best excuse For ice cream 8/12/23

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/23/2023 2:12:00 PM

We are cooler this week and expect rain next week.

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 9/8/2023 1:09:00 PM

wonderful personification. This is absolutely a gorgeous write.

Juliet Ligon

Date: 8/25/2023 6:49:00 PM

Great job personifying August! I love the detail of the sun peaking through "Pouring your glory into Precisely trimmed squares On my kitchen floor."

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/19/2023 10:22:00 AM

Dear Michelle, your poetic Apologies August is both charming and eloquent. Clever use of language "insistent inconsistency" and enchanting imagery "manes of wheaten hills" make for a lovely and reflective piece with a delightful ending. Warmest wishes my inspiring friend.. ~Susan

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/24/2023 8:45:00 PM

I had fun playing with those lines, so glad for your comments as always as I admire your talent so much~

John Watt

Date: 8/18/2023 10:04:00 PM

I have to agree with Gary about your beautifully poetic way with words, whether free verse, metered, rhymed, or not. Your diatribe to a personified August rings true, as it can seem domineering at times. Love so many lines and phrases here; "callous, garish, and imperious" sets a great opening tone, "peeling My patience, my humor and The back of my neck" is a clever turn of phrase, and "Your manes of wheaten hills Crowning the coming harvest" is pure nature loveliness. Fun ending, too. That wouldn't be Tillamook ice cream by any chance, would it? I get such sheer delight in reading your creations.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/24/2023 8:43:00 PM

Fun fact, the 'manes of wheaten hills' came to me when we were driving up I 5 north back to Oregon right through the heart of central California, with all their wheat covered hills - am thrilled as always for your input, hope you can get some Tillamook ice cream soon~

Valsa George

Date: 8/18/2023 4:28:00 AM

August is the month when summer is at its peak with sultry heat waves. It gives us ample excuse for delighting on ice creams. Some beautiful images ! Enjoyed your lovely poem dear Michelle !

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/24/2023 8:47:00 PM

belated thank you for your kind words Valsa, am always glad to hear from you~

Gary Radice

Date: 8/15/2023 1:57:00 AM

August in Ol' Blighty has been a wash out so far. August should be apologizing to the UK. I digress. This is a great read Michelle. I love the structure and descriptions..you have a beautifully poetic way with words. I'll add that I also love anything to do with ice cream. :) Cheers - Gary

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/17/2023 9:27:00 PM

Your comments are always so positive, I am very glad you enjoyed this one, hope you have a good August, thanks Gary

Jim Slaughter

Date: 8/13/2023 10:14:00 AM

I love this, Michelle, and I will try and remember it the next time I complain about August.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/13/2023 1:50:00 PM

Hope you enjoy a lot of ice cream this August, thanks Jim

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/13/2023 3:38:00 AM

Oh! This is so beautiful, Michelle, I love how you personified August:) and who doesn't love ice cream??

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/13/2023 1:49:00 PM

Thank goodness for ice cream in the summer - thanks for commenting, Jo

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/12/2023 9:03:00 PM

It has been hot hot hot these days, though great for tanning, I'm looking forward to cooler weather Michelle :)

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/13/2023 1:49:00 PM

Me too! Thanks for your comment

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/12/2023 7:50:00 PM

Love how you turned this poem from a tragedy into a comedy in the last few lines there, Michelle. A bit of Shakespeare in you, I reckon. (By comedy, I don't mean 'hardy-har-har' either). Cheers, gw

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/12/2023 7:57:00 PM

We are facing a week of 100 degree days, at least we will eat a lot of ice cream! Thanks for stopping by, gw :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/12/2023 6:16:00 PM

Oh, what a delightful read! Truly exquisite, Michelle! I relished every moment of it.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/12/2023 7:56:00 PM

Thank you very much, that means a lot~

Akkina Downing

Date: 8/12/2023 5:11:00 PM

Oh this was a fun read. I enjoyed it very much. :)

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/12/2023 7:55:00 PM

Appreciate it, thank you Akkina

Paige Hind

Date: 8/12/2023 3:02:00 PM

Quite beautiful, Michelle!

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/12/2023 3:16:00 PM

Thank you very much, Paige

Bill Baker

Date: 8/12/2023 2:42:00 PM

Excellent poetry, Michelle, especially the ending few lines. :-) I just finished making homemade ice cream ... Chocolate ... I'm thinking about an early dinner so we can get into the dessert phase of the evening. :-) Smiles ~ Blessing, my friend. Bill

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/12/2023 3:15:00 PM

Homemade ice cream! what time can I come by :)

Yann Rolland

Date: 8/12/2023 2:42:00 PM

very nice, Ending.there are many reasons to forgive auguste, thanks for the enjoyable poem

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/12/2023 3:15:00 PM

I am glad you liked it, yann, thank you

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/12/2023 2:09:00 PM

Yep, summer is slipping by. We have a lot of fires here in Canada. We can use the cooler weather. Thanks for your visit.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/12/2023 3:15:00 PM

We are heading to a straight week of 100 plus days, also hoping for cooler weather, thanks for commenting~

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 8/12/2023 1:11:00 PM

'My windows grow more golden In the bask of your benevolence' Beautiful images, Michelle! Enjoyable reading.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/12/2023 3:14:00 PM

Thank you so much, Evelyn

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/12/2023 12:09:00 PM

Love this, Michelle! You find the best excuse to indulge in ice cream! …so I will forgive your sultry swagger

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/12/2023 12:14:00 PM

Yes that is the silver lining here, thanks Kim

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/12/2023 11:20:00 AM

I, too, dislike August for its heat, but you have descriptively revealed some reasons to appreciate it. Especially the ice cream! Blessings, Kim M

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/12/2023 11:23:00 AM

Peach ice cream is my favorite to eat in august, thanks for commenting, Kim