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Apollo and Daphne by Bernini - A Collaboration with David Kavanagh

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We start at the end, with the warmth of his breath on her skin Baulked by proximity, he never knew how to begin A golden-tainted obsession, bitterly laced with lead Transformed rapture to quicksilver the instant Cupid fled A moment held, made static, tender touch met with distress For seeded in her veins, lies a stem of the wilderness Pursuit stalled just in time, yet time itself recalibrates Supplanted upon breaking, a laurel shoot germinates Oh, what should have been the faintest touch cannot be undone Rooted in the throes of escape, bound to bask in full sun Sinews harden to fibre, each pulse springs a bonsai tree Bark chokes her voice box; silent screams nest in the canopy Locked in abjection, as her praying hands first plead then splay As liberty, though not consciousness, is taken away Overruled in evergreen, contortion as regal crown Petrified white marble shall become her eternal gown In Ovid’s Metamorphoses, the god Apollo mocks Cupid for wielding a bow, claiming it unworthy of a child. In retaliation, Cupid shoots Apollo with a golden arrow to ignite love, and Daphne a chaste nymph with a leaden one to incite revulsion. Though innocent, Daphne becomes the target of Apollo’s relentless pursuit. Just as he is about to seize her, she prays for escape, and her body is transformed into a laurel tree. Bernini’s sculpture captures the precise moment of this metamorphosis.

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Date: 6/10/2025 10:15:00 AM
Dear DD and David, here again for my art lesson. :) I like how you blend myth and feeling into something alive, Apollo’s breath, Cupid’s arrows, and the wild, transformation of Daphne. Even in pain, something new and evergreen seems to always grow. A wonderful collaboration it is. Blessings, DD and David, Daniel
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Date: 6/10/2025 12:10:00 PM
That was the intent or perhaps more the event that occurred - to occupy that moment and try to bring it to life. It was exciting seeing David's very grounded lines and how they connected with the more emotional context I tend to draw out. I'm so pleased with the result and how well it blended. There are certainly lines easily attributable to each of us, but also lines I think people wouldn't guess the author of. It was great to do and I'm hoping I learnt a lot :D thanks for your kind words, always appreciated
Date: 6/10/2025 1:05:00 AM
I missed your (daily) postings - now I see that you have written a well-crafted collab. Well done, both of you for a most enlightening poem that not only instructs, but draws me into the moment. Love it! Su
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Date: 6/10/2025 7:39:00 AM
Haha I'll see how I go, it was kind of a habit that I'm now out of x
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Date: 6/10/2025 4:49:00 AM
Hell's bells! People can be so darn spiteful, it beggers believe. You keep on posting, please - not that many poems to read otherwise (many are merely AI- generated word porn).
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Date: 6/10/2025 1:30:00 AM
Thank you Su! I had to read up on mythology, chemistry and botany for this one - so it did take longer :) I unfortunately got direct criticism posting daily and I found it very hurtful, so I just post occasionally now and leave the majority unshared. Thanks for stopping by x
Date: 6/9/2025 8:32:00 PM
This sculpture reinforces the old adage, "Never let anyone come up behind you". The sculpture is beautiful, as is your poem.
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Date: 6/10/2025 1:23:00 AM
I still blame Cupid haha thank you for your kindness in stopping by x
Date: 6/9/2025 6:51:00 PM
Hi DD....see the comments I posted with David..just copy and paste in yours... a magnificent collaborative effort producing an enthralling poem. Reawakened my interest in Greek Mythology..have a project now. The poem lives and breathes. Well done...just love it.
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Date: 6/10/2025 1:20:00 AM
Thank you Paul for visiting both pages :) this collaboration has certainly whet my appetite for the myths, so I'll put an advance reservation in for your myth series :) David is phenomenal to write with, his word choices feel like temporal shifts so the precision of the moment the statue depicts plays out in heart wrenching slow motion. It's an honour to have contributed to this one. Thank you for your welcome visit x
Date: 6/9/2025 12:23:00 PM
Thanks so much for the opportunity to collaborate on Bernini’s mesmeric sculpture Dilly, considered by many to be the greatest ever (hard to argue with) by any stretch of the imagination, hopefully we somehow did him some justice by trying to capture in words the instant of transformation, you are a joy to work with, cheers David
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Date: 6/9/2025 2:56:00 PM
It was a wonderful choice David, I always think myths are out of my league but it was fascinating to explore this one alongside the sculpture which is of course mesmerising. It's not typical to see this one considered from Daphne's perspective and I really enjoyed taking the inspiration from the moment depicted. I was wowed every time your lines appeared - thank you so much. A joy indeed :)
Date: 6/9/2025 11:33:00 AM
and my thoughts also offered to you, Dilly...For the love of a nymph, he had desire, but platonic, Daphne would never know such love. When read long ago, I wondered if she had the means as a tree, to regret her prayer. In the last verse, I'll consider that she could think... A metamorphosis that would never bring satisfaction to either of them. Which should I feel sorrier for? Finely meshed lines, Dilly and David.
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Date: 6/9/2025 1:40:00 PM
I'd not actually encountered the myth beforehand, so it was fascinating to research. Daphne didn't waver for a minute. The exact moment of transformation depicted in the sculpture was at the heart of the poem and the metamorphosis a desperate measure. The detail on the sculpture is truly breathtaking, I'll certainly add Rome to my list of jaunts and hopefully take a look at some point for real. Thank you for your comment - my affinity was completely with Daphne of course, but really Cupid was the villain of the tale :)

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