Apnea

Battling at the thought’s end. Ruined cities.
The last survivors were helped to escape
together with their unborn children.
Eyes tossing nervously. Fears floating on schizophrenic reality.
A ghost passed by resembling her,
yet it is not possible she survived of the massacre – 
she risked her life,
bet our happiness.

Memories, naked, spring from the soul’s catacombs
to remind us the youth’s past.
We chose the way we wanted to lose,
the defeat hurts less.
Empty chairs looking at the sunset
like our blood was never spilled in this battleground.
Swinging between the fear and the sky
having the apnea capturing my sorrow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Neumann Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 3:51 AM
Congratulations. Makes me breathless...
Gitas Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 3:52 AM
Mark, thank you very much my friend. I am very happy for this poem..
Van Der Merwe Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 12:19 AM
Congratulations Miltos - well deserved. Great write. Mark
Negron Flores Avatar
August 24, 2016 at 3:05 PM
Congratulations Miltos on the placement of the contest.
Gitas Avatar
August 24, 2016 at 3:40 PM
I am very happy. I did not expect this third place in the competition. Thank you very much...
Raven Avatar
August 6, 2016 at 7:51 AM
A deep and excellent first write Miltos. Super content. The piece sings. I always like to start reading poets from the start for you always catch little gems and your first write is just that. Enjoy yourself here on Poetry Soup my friend. This has to be a seven.,,,Mike.
Gitas Avatar
August 6, 2016 at 7:55 AM
Thank you for the very good words. Glad to know other poets and to exchange views on poetry. I will be glad to talk and read your poems. Good evening from Greece
Diamond Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 3:57 PM
I think that you brillianly use the concept of apnea to draw broad strokes of other topics. It is also a very enjoyable read
Gitas Avatar
July 31, 2016 at 4:09 AM
You just so as you say. Transportation used the apnea to touch on other topics ...
Neumann Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 10:38 AM
I like this and especially 'schizophrenic reality' and 'apnoea capturing sorrow'. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I have only been on here for a few months now, but the soup is a good home and sort of family.
Gitas Avatar
July 31, 2016 at 4:10 AM
Thank you for your kind words. I'm glad you liked it. Well I found you and I will be happy to talk on poetry and poems.
Dietrich Avatar
July 29, 2016 at 9:20 PM
Just stumbled on your reply to my comment. Ok, I can see what you mean now!!
Gitas Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 2:16 AM
The word apnea has through her poetry. The moments that are on the verge of a situation to inspire. Good morning from GREECE
Dietrich Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 8:25 PM
Miltos. Apnea is a sleep disorder. WERe you using that as a symbol? Lovely images in this sad poem.
Gitas Avatar
July 29, 2016 at 4:06 AM
Exactly. But with what describes this sad poem the reader may suffer apnea. I speak metaphorically. I always use symbolic titles.
A  Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 4:45 AM
Miltos,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
Gitas Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 6:09 AM
I write poetry for many years and I have published seven poetry collections in Greece . I make an effort to learn you now my poetry . I will be glad to talk and read your poems . I will wait your comments on my next poems...
A   Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 10:02 PM
Back here once again, Miltos, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Gitas Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 1:22 AM
Thank you for your warm welcome. I write poetry than 11 year. I write about love, death, loneliness and time flies. I issued in Greece seven poetry collections and now make an effort to share with you my poetry. I am 32 years old and I love reading, writing poetry and listening to music. My profession is a journalist.In the coming days I will post and my other poems and I want your opinion. Kisses from sunny Greece :)
A   Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 8:53 PM
Miltos, well done on this poem, I'm pleased to read your words. Welcome to poetry soup. LINDA
Gitas Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 1:13 AM
Good to see you. I will be glad to talk about poetry ... thanks.
Andresen Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 12:52 PM
- An impressive and great first poem, Miltos - Welcome to Poetry Soup - hugs from Norway // Anne-Lise :)
Gitas Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 1:52 PM
Thanks for the reception. I want you to meet my poetry ...
Troutman Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 10:29 AM
Www, that's really deep, excellent write
Gitas Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 10:33 AM
Thank you Tanis. Your words give me courage to continue
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