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Another Mourning

Morning rears a dreadful head and barks out her soul leaving the bliss behind to rest alone with thoughts numbed from last night's nirvana Foggy eyes pour over burnt toast and runny eggs a yellow blur occurs was it a kiss or a slap of a slighted hand holding me at bay My mind sits still as the coffee turns swirling aimlessly amongst empty ruins I am at a loss Pain strangles my throat I curl my lips and pretend as I muscle in another day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/22/2017 2:27:00 PM
The breakfast sounds wonderful..But I can feel the loniliness in that morn which is very sad and moving...Am touched.
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Date: 5/22/2017 1:18:00 PM
Tim, your creativity add layers to your poems . . . I am always amazed at your way with words:) Amitiés
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Date: 5/22/2017 12:27:00 PM
You've made me hungry, Tim, I'm going to go in there and just cook a couple of eggs with bacon... and I love burnt toast.. Yes I know it's not good for you... ~* I also wanted to personally say thank you so very much for reading my poem and the congratulations I’m honored ~*
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Date: 5/22/2017 6:41:00 AM
Sounds exactly like what I went through this morning. Very cool Tim.
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Date: 5/21/2017 6:56:00 PM
so basically a typical day for me! LOL nice write!
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Date: 5/21/2017 3:56:00 PM
Keep strong mourning will turn to happiness...eventually!
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Date: 5/21/2017 1:24:00 PM
- So touching sad, Tim .... sending sunshine hugs to you // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/21/2017 9:27:00 AM
I am happy if you muscle in more days. It's almost summer, lots of sun and long days! It will be alright.
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Date: 5/21/2017 8:32:00 AM
Tim this is so heartbreaking <3 Muscle in another day-please do! HUGS <3 <3 <3
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