Anniversary of Their Honeymoon

Wedding wines - rather champagne shines and bubbly breakout of blushing bride. Groom with giant heart, gracious, grateful - grips her hand with his handsome wholeness. Helps his lovely lady into limousine, longing for her lips. Laps leaping, longing, leaving the crowd’s “so long!” Cans chiming cheers. Crowd chuckles at car’s rear. “Honeymoon here we come!” Coreen casts a shameless glance at Glen. His green anticipation, Gable-debonair. Goosebumps and gorgeous view - grand peaks of her bosom buddies, brimming with lace and brouhaha. His eyes - riveting, reveling, robust, ruddy and willing. ~ Throbbing thirst, thistles ‘neath terrycloth, while he waits. Anticipation hurts - artfully, agonizingly. Her appearance in nascent negligée, nearly naughty, nearly a no-no, but not, for they’ve tied the knot and into a knot they go. Get’m tiger! Tongues tangoed, trip to Timbuktu, tipsy and top-see and no toodaloo - a forever frou-frou. Silk surrender, sliding, suspend her, satisfaction in space. Stirring, sipping, inhabiting each other, sensational and sweet. 9/2/2022 Anniversary Contest Sponsor: Sara Kendrick

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Date: 10/16/2022 2:35:00 PM
Kim, wonderful write and congratulations on your placement in Sara's contest, blessings Constance
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/17/2022 6:55:00 AM
Thank you, Constance!
Date: 10/16/2022 6:40:00 AM
Congratulations on being on the winners' list in my contest. I was excited to see who I had chosen to be on the winners' page myself. Way to go. Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/16/2022 11:09:00 AM
I always like the big reveal! Thank you, Sara! I had fun writing this!
Date: 9/6/2022 2:59:00 AM
If this does not go straight to the winner's circle I have totally misread it. "His eyes - riveting, reveling, robust, ruddy and willing." was more than enough to get it there.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/6/2022 3:28:00 AM
Thank you so much! So glad you like it! :)
Date: 9/2/2022 11:09:00 PM
A happy wedding with all the trimmings, Best for a win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/3/2022 8:17:00 AM
Thank you, my dear friend! <3
Date: 9/2/2022 4:20:00 PM
WOW! Great entry for the contest, Kim. Certainly qualifies as an Alliteration poem.:-) I enjoyed the journey. Have a great weekend! Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/2/2022 5:05:00 PM
Thank you, Bill! I’m not usually up for alliteration but I like how this came together,
Date: 9/2/2022 3:01:00 PM
Glen and Coreen, happy anniversary! I love their tale it is cute and very sexy. Toodaloo and luck in the contest!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/2/2022 5:05:00 PM
Toodles as a friend used to say. Thank you, dear one! I appreciate you!
Date: 9/2/2022 1:10:00 PM
Wow! This is so gorgeous , it blew me away. Such stunning beauty from start to finish. Wish I were there. You deserve first place plus POTD, dear Kim. A FAV, but of course. Tremendous piem! Pangie xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/2/2022 2:26:00 PM
Thank you so much, Pangie! ((Hugs))
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