Anniversary of Their Honeymoon

Wedding wines - rather champagne shines and bubbly breakout of blushing bride. Groom with giant heart, gracious, grateful - grips her hand with his handsome wholeness. Helps his lovely lady into limousine, longing for her lips. Laps leaping, longing, leaving the crowd’s “so long!” Cans chiming cheers. Crowd chuckles at car’s rear. “Honeymoon here we come!” Coreen casts a shameless glance at Glen. His green anticipation, Gable-debonair. Goosebumps and gorgeous view - grand peaks of her bosom buddies, brimming with lace and brouhaha. His eyes - riveting, reveling, robust, ruddy and willing. ~ Throbbing thirst, thistles ‘neath terrycloth, while he waits. Anticipation hurts - artfully, agonizingly. Her appearance in nascent negligée, nearly naughty, nearly a no-no, but not, for they’ve tied the knot and into a knot they go. Get’m tiger! Tongues tangoed, trip to Timbuktu, tipsy and top-see and no toodaloo - a forever frou-frou. Silk surrender, sliding, suspend her, satisfaction in space. Stirring, sipping, inhabiting each other, sensational and sweet. 9/2/2022 Anniversary Contest Sponsor: Sara Kendrick
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La France Avatar
October 16, 2022 at 2:35 PM
Kim, wonderful write and congratulations on your placement in Sara's contest, blessings Constance
Rodrigues Avatar
October 17, 2022 at 6:55 AM
Thank you, Constance!
Kendrick Avatar
October 16, 2022 at 6:40 AM
Congratulations on being on the winners' list in my contest. I was excited to see who I had chosen to be on the winners' page myself. Way to go. Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
October 16, 2022 at 11:09 AM
I always like the big reveal! Thank you, Sara! I had fun writing this!
Krutsinger Avatar
September 6, 2022 at 2:59 AM
If this does not go straight to the winner's circle I have totally misread it. "His eyes - riveting, reveling, robust, ruddy and willing." was more than enough to get it there.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 6, 2022 at 3:28 AM
Thank you so much! So glad you like it! :)
Buhagiar Avatar
September 2, 2022 at 11:09 PM
A happy wedding with all the trimmings, Best for a win.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 8:17 AM
Thank you, my dear friend! <3
Baker Avatar
September 2, 2022 at 4:20 PM
WOW! Great entry for the contest, Kim. Certainly qualifies as an Alliteration poem.:-) I enjoyed the journey. Have a great weekend! Bill
Rodrigues Avatar
September 2, 2022 at 5:05 PM
Thank you, Bill! I’m not usually up for alliteration but I like how this came together,
Anaya Avatar
September 2, 2022 at 3:01 PM
Glen and Coreen, happy anniversary! I love their tale it is cute and very sexy. Toodaloo and luck in the contest!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 2, 2022 at 5:05 PM
Toodles as a friend used to say. Thank you, dear one! I appreciate you!
Romios Avatar
September 2, 2022 at 1:10 PM
Wow! This is so gorgeous , it blew me away. Such stunning beauty from start to finish. Wish I were there. You deserve first place plus POTD, dear Kim. A FAV, but of course. Tremendous piem! Pangie xx
Rodrigues Avatar
September 2, 2022 at 2:26 PM
Thank you so much, Pangie! ((Hugs))
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