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Angels Above

I go to a place of sadness and pain, where birds chirp and trees bend their branches; I even go in the snow and in the rain. My tears of sorrow fall in great avalanches, and unseen, unheard there are angels drifting; where birds chirp- and trees bend their branches. Always near are many misty shapes shifting, sister, father, mother, grandma, lover; and unseen, unheard there are, angels drifting. Even- two sweet baby angels hover, with love they touch this girl who weeps for them; sister, father, mother, grandma- lover. Good people in another realm, angels become, they dwell above and are angels that come; with love- they touch this girl, who weeps for them. Good people, in another realm angels become, (I go to a place of sadness and pain;) they dwell, above and are angels that come, (I even go in the snow and in the rain.) ____________________________ December 15, 2016 Poetry/Terzanelle/Angels Above Copyright Protected, ID 16-858-410-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Angels, Sponsor, Debbie Guzzi Second Place

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Date: 1/5/2017 8:41:00 AM
Your poem is wonderful and a well deserved win, Constance. BIG congratulations.
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Date: 1/5/2017 5:06:00 AM
Inspired write, wonderful piece, captivating, well deserved win!! Super 7
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Date: 1/5/2017 3:17:00 AM
Wonderful win, Constance:) well deserved with this splendid Terzanelle:) many congratulations:)
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Date: 1/4/2017 11:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win! 7 ; )
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Date: 1/4/2017 10:00:00 PM
Very beautiful , Broken Wings, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/4/2017 9:08:00 PM
Congrats on your lovely poem, Constance!
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Date: 1/4/2017 6:48:00 PM
Very heart rendering. Congratulations.
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Date: 1/4/2017 5:04:00 PM
Wonderful and nice piece...Congrats on your well deserved win....
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Date: 1/4/2017 4:38:00 PM
Beautifully written Constance. Congrats on your placement.
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Date: 12/16/2016 12:54:00 AM
Sad and touching, Constance:) may God give you the needed comfort:)
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