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Angelic Dance

Her grand entrance awaits peering in vibrant curtains fluttering expectation her body poised holding a dream... chatter surrounds close distance hands joined aloud her entrance... streaming light resolve a pure flower through her peaceful frantic dream screams her soul touching each a poet in her candid solitude a triumphant dance allure my breath away one moment her flow life anew

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/7/2013 10:05:00 AM

RICK -CONGRATULATIONS!!! with your 5th poem theme contest. always & forever * Linda

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 7/5/2013 2:28:00 PM

Rick congrats on your fine win. A grand write. Warm Smiles, Connie

John Posey

Date: 7/4/2013 4:40:00 PM

Rick, this is a great win... Congrats... Jake

Skat A

Date: 7/3/2013 11:28:00 PM

RICK, Congratulations, <3:-) A wonderful 5th poem. thank you for choosing my contest........ ............. LOVE * SKAT

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 7/14/2011 12:48:00 PM

Congratulations Rick on your wonderful poem taking third place. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/29/2011 5:51:00 AM

Congratulations ^Rick on your win in the "Any First Year Poem on PS" contest sponsored by Brian Strand. Love, Carol

Cory Long

Date: 6/28/2011 5:44:00 PM

congrats on your fine win my friend,cory

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/28/2011 5:15:00 PM

so much to try to absorb...a true love surely? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/28/2011 2:54:00 PM

Congrats Rick on your super wonderful win in the contest with this elegant piece my friend..wonderful words of expression.. oh..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/3/2011 6:50:00 PM

Congrats Rick on your featured poem this week on the Soup .. a great one to share with us all my friend with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/31/2011 2:39:00 PM

Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Rick

Elaine George

Date: 3/29/2011 2:38:00 AM

Simply beautiful. Rick. Many congrats on your featured poem of the week. Elaine

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/28/2011 6:42:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved featured poem this week ^Rick. Love, Carol

Todd Mapes

Date: 3/27/2011 6:32:00 PM

two thumbs up buddy.....love ya

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/27/2011 6:21:00 PM

Angelic Danced being featured this week, Rick. Congratulations

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/27/2011 4:40:00 PM

Congrats Rick on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great one to share with us all my friend with luv...

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/7/2009 8:42:00 PM

This is lovely, like she is a dream! Beautiful poetry, Rick! Rather mystical...is she real? Nicely written!~ Carrie

Derrick Burton

Date: 1/7/2009 7:09:00 PM

wow, and never say anything I dont mean in a comment. really liked this poetry and how it flowed through almost as lyrics and melodys through my soul. enjoyed reading this. keep up the exellent work. have a good day.