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Then an angel of the Lord stood before them, and the glory of the Lord shone around them, and they were terrified. —Luke 2:9 CSB Little cherub with wee little wings. Strawberries, crushed, enamor your cheeks in Victorian fashion. Oft naked, floating on chapel ceilings, near the mother and babe. Little cherub, not scary at all. Magnanimous glory you do not seek. You’d be squashed if you weren’t so squeaky clean. Like fleas on the shoulder, the angelic and the devilish, depending on mood will be flicked away. Little lambs cut a hole in their ghost costumes, out comes their head, then they don a halo - oh, the little angel. God puts up with such things as sticky wings - irreparably weak. Heaven they don’t seek.

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Date: 8/31/2023 1:34:00 AM
This is a new take for me on angelic presence.. I really like it! (Scottish angels? Why not?)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/31/2023 1:27:00 PM
Thank you, Chris! :)
Date: 8/24/2023 3:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, dear Kim !
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/24/2023 12:55:00 PM
Thank you, Valsa!
Date: 8/22/2023 3:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A creative/fun write. I enjoyed it. Have a great day.............
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/22/2023 5:04:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 8/22/2023 2:16:00 PM
I liked this. And I like your style!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/22/2023 5:04:00 PM
Thanks, Paige!
Date: 8/21/2023 7:56:00 PM
I Still prefer the two cherubs stationed over the Ark Cover on the Holy Ark... Old-fashioned, I guess
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/22/2023 4:36:00 AM
Exactly! Real angels!
Date: 8/21/2023 7:18:00 PM
What an endearing poem, Kim. Very special indeed. Good luck in the contest. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/22/2023 4:37:00 AM
Thank you, Akkina!
Date: 8/21/2023 6:43:00 PM
Wee little wings, how special, Kimmy. I must try it!;D
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/22/2023 4:37:00 AM
Thank you, Anaya!
Date: 8/21/2023 2:29:00 PM
"God puts up with such things as sticky wings -":) Love it!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/21/2023 2:31:00 PM
Thank you, Joe! :)
Date: 8/21/2023 12:06:00 PM
Great contrast of cherubs. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/21/2023 1:25:00 PM
Thank you, Victor! Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 8/21/2023 10:39:00 AM
Nice portrayal of angelic cherubs. Beautiful poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/21/2023 1:25:00 PM
Thank you, Jay!
Date: 8/21/2023 9:08:00 AM
Such a cute poem. I love the lines, 'the angelic and the devilish/ depending on the mood/ will be flicked away.' A clever write. Have a wonderful Day.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/21/2023 1:24:00 PM
Thank you, Jerry!
Date: 8/21/2023 4:44:00 AM
Cherubs are so cute to look at in their naked body and tiny wings ! They are often painted around the altar. A lovely entry. All the Best.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/21/2023 5:18:00 AM
Thank you, Valsa!
Date: 8/20/2023 8:53:00 PM
How wonderful. Such an endearing poem. Cherubs with sticky wings ! Burlesque is new to me as a poetry form, Kim. I love it. To liken them to earthly children that God has to put up with, is such a turn around, and so funny. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem, and teaching me a new form. BOL
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/21/2023 5:18:00 AM
Thank you for your lovely comment!
Date: 8/20/2023 8:15:00 PM
A wonderful poem, full of charm. Hope your week is blessed, Kim. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/20/2023 8:41:00 PM
Thank you, my friend! Hope your week is blessed too! :)

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