Angelic

Then an angel of the Lord stood before them, and the glory of the Lord shone around them, and they were terrified.
—Luke 2:9 CSB

Little cherub with wee little wings.
Strawberries, crushed, enamor your cheeks
in Victorian fashion. Oft naked,
floating on chapel ceilings,
near the mother and babe.

Little cherub, not scary at all.
Magnanimous glory you do not seek.
You’d be squashed
if you weren’t so squeaky clean.

Like fleas on the shoulder,
the angelic and the devilish,
depending on mood
will be flicked away.

Little lambs cut a hole in their ghost costumes,
out comes their head,
then they don
a halo - oh, the little angel.

God puts up with such things
as sticky wings -
irreparably weak.
Heaven they don’t seek.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Grieves Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 1:34 AM
This is a new take for me on angelic presence.. I really like it! (Scottish angels? Why not?)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 1:27 PM
Thank you, Chris! :)
George Avatar
August 24, 2023 at 3:36 AM
Congratulations on your win, dear Kim !
Rodrigues Avatar
August 24, 2023 at 12:55 PM
Thank you, Valsa!
Goldsmith Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 3:41 PM
Congratulations on your win. A creative/fun write. I enjoyed it. Have a great day.............
Rodrigues Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 5:04 PM
Thank you!
Hind Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 2:16 PM
I liked this. And I like your style!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 5:04 PM
Thanks, Paige!
Wolf Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 7:56 PM
I Still prefer the two cherubs stationed over the Ark Cover on the Holy Ark... Old-fashioned, I guess
Rodrigues Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 4:36 AM
Exactly! Real angels!
Downing  Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 7:18 PM
What an endearing poem, Kim. Very special indeed. Good luck in the contest. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 4:37 AM
Thank you, Akkina!
Anaya Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 6:43 PM
Wee little wings, how special, Kimmy. I must try it!;D
Rodrigues Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 4:37 AM
Thank you, Anaya!
DiMino Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 2:29 PM
"God puts up with such things as sticky wings -":) Love it!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 2:31 PM
Thank you, Joe! :)
Buhagiar Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 12:06 PM
Great contrast of cherubs. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 1:25 PM
Thank you, Victor! Hugs ~ Kim
Narain Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 10:39 AM
Nice portrayal of angelic cherubs. Beautiful poem.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 1:25 PM
Thank you, Jay!
Brotherton Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 9:08 AM
Such a cute poem. I love the lines, 'the angelic and the devilish/ depending on the mood/ will be flicked away.' A clever write. Have a wonderful Day.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 1:24 PM
Thank you, Jerry!
George Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 4:44 AM
Cherubs are so cute to look at in their naked body and tiny wings ! They are often painted around the altar. A lovely entry. All the Best.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 5:18 AM
Thank you, Valsa!
Volumes Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 8:53 PM
How wonderful. Such an endearing poem. Cherubs with sticky wings ! Burlesque is new to me as a poetry form, Kim. I love it. To liken them to earthly children that God has to put up with, is such a turn around, and so funny. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem, and teaching me a new form. BOL
Rodrigues Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 5:18 AM
Thank you for your lovely comment!
Buehler Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 8:15 PM
A wonderful poem, full of charm. Hope your week is blessed, Kim. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 8:41 PM
Thank you, my friend! Hope your week is blessed too! :)
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