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Angelic

Outside the open window, The morning air is all awash with angels. Richard Wilbur
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In a lush garden—bathed in halcyon light, Where opulent blooms imbue the night, An ethereal glamour—a dulcet spell Unveiling secrets no tongue can tell From heaven’s realm—angelic choirs Descend with grace; their voices inspire. Their reverential hymns ripple through the air. A pure melody—beyond compare Devout and innocent, their presence sublime, Their angelic might shape the course of time. Few people realize the power they possess. Guiding us through—life's intricate mess Music, they say, is the speech of angels. A divine elixir that our souls entangle. With each note, they weave a tapestry of love. Filling our hearts with blessings from above. Protecting angels of life, unseen yet near, Watch over us with a love so clear. Though they may fly high beyond our sight, Their eyes are always upon us, shining bright. In their leisure, they glimpse what we do. With pure and sincere devotion, they sue. They view our struggles, joys, and fears. And offer comfort to wipe away our tears. To love for the sake of being loved is human. However, sincere love is divine, not an illusion. Their devotion is unrestricted and boundless. Graceful momentum—spatially senseless So let us embrace the angelic symphony. And let its harmonies set us free. In their songs, we find solace and peace. A glimpse of heaven's grace that will never cease.
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La France Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 5:28 PM
Sotto, beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, I love the image, music and quote, Constance
Andresen Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 10:43 AM
- Back with a well deserved congratulations, Las :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 2:07 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Angelic" is a heavenly write. "Love It" Have a great day............
Seeker Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 8:13 PM
As predicted, as was inevitable, an easy win ~ warmest congratulations, SP
George Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 7:22 PM
Back to your poem with hearty Congratulations on this well deserved first place win, dear Lasaad
Volumes Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 7:02 PM
Totally comforting to believe it's true to see, that Angels care for you and me, and wrap us in a perfect symphony. This is Simply Stunning.
George Avatar
August 19, 2023 at 9:19 PM
This is beyond all appreciation. Any subject is viable to your facile pen. So lovely.... To say the least, this goes into my Fave. A sure winner !
Seeker Avatar
August 19, 2023 at 7:41 PM
Oh wow! Too good. I better stick with the ‘abandoned’ prompt for the contest ~ this one will be difficult to beat!
Empress Avatar
August 19, 2023 at 7:39 AM
Sincere love is not an illusion but a true and divine blessing , and one must appreciate when given. This is such a thoughtful and very moving write with so much depth in every line of yours, creative and sumptuous diction , and I absolutely love your rhymes and flow of thoughts here, has a very symphonic rhythm that i truly didnt want to end reading. Impeccable! Such a fine write with exquisite imagery, I especially loved the “ halcyon light” line so good
Lindley Avatar
August 19, 2023 at 7:34 AM
My friend this is to me an epic poem its fantastic imagery and truly superb wordsmithing. So much to absorb, that even I had to read it three times. A masterpiece and a fav for me! God bless.
Lindley Avatar
August 19, 2023 at 7:36 AM
Surely this qualifies as a fine POTD! Its got my vote. God bless.
Sharma  Avatar
August 19, 2023 at 7:10 AM
I'm truly in pure admiration of this piece, the cadence, rhythmic flow with elegant rhymes, impeccable artistry and wonderful wordsmithery has mesmerized my soul. So many amazing lines here to quote, especially "in a lush green garden-bathed in halcyon light", " Their reverential hymns ripple through the air", "to love for the sake of being loved is human" Such exquisite tapestry of emotions and words you've painted here!
Poet Avatar
August 19, 2023 at 7:15 AM
I am greatly appreciative of the insightful and thought-provoking analysis you have provided for my humble poem. Your contribution has truly elevated my spirit, and for that, I express my deepest gratitude. Let us continue to engage and grow together within the Poetry Soup community, a remarkable and delightful platform for our shared enjoyment.
Pandit Avatar
August 19, 2023 at 5:20 AM
In a lush garden—bathed in halcyon light, Where opulent blooms imbue the night... a perfect setting to welcome the angelic vibes. A solemn voice to your poem throughout, Lasaad. You rock!
Andresen Avatar
August 19, 2023 at 1:50 AM
- Angels on earth show us that after all there is goodness in this world... When you need it most, they appear - like an unexpected guest, with loving care - A beautiful poem, Las :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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