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Angel

He 
Wonders
If he's here
Or has he slipped
To the other side
Past the reach of her hand
His mind grasps for her presence
Hearing the softness of her voice
Wishing himself back into her arms
Eyes open he sees her angelic face

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/10/2015 9:36:00 AM
feeling blessed :) thank you friend..
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Date: 10/6/2015 11:34:00 PM
For a short piece, this is wonderful on several different levels, Richard. I am going to read it to a friend tomorrow whose wife had a little heart crisis two weeks ago. How their marriage relationship is based on them being one of each other's angels. Just beautiful.
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Date: 10/4/2015 11:00:00 AM
This is an excellent etheree my dear friend, Richard. I'm so glad and grateful that I've read it tonight. Thank you so much for sharing. Thank you so much as well for enjoying my poems and again for the birthday greetings. love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 9/29/2015 9:35:00 PM
Wow, this is simply beautiful!!
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Date: 9/29/2015 7:18:00 AM
To my faves Richard.....this almost....brought me to instant tears....had to switch mental tracks, am at work, just opened deli for the day, feel like an omelet after this....anticipation.....lost.....release....relief......got it all wonderful....jim
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/29/2015 7:57:00 AM
Wow, thanks James!
Date: 9/27/2015 8:11:00 PM
wow, I can see the comments you are getting on this one. I think for a novice, you are QUITE good. Keep it up. I like this form so much, I once did a chapbook of all etheree in it! As for the ABC poem. OH my gosh, that is so hard to do. You have got to try it, richard. I know you can come up with something amazing.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/29/2015 8:00:00 AM
Thanks, I just got back from holidays so now that I'm back to my routine might give it a go.
Date: 9/26/2015 4:44:00 PM
I wish I could write an etheree as beautiful as yours...So so beautiful.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/27/2015 6:24:00 PM
Thanks Charmaine, you are kind, I am a novice when it comes to this form.
Date: 9/26/2015 9:30:00 AM
Wonderful ending Richard. Beautiful write. Not easy to do in this Etheree form. It flowed perfectly. The ending was climatic to the reader. How I at least wanted it to end. A winner here. Few sentences say so much, tasteful romantic theme, just right. A well deserved 7+
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/26/2015 3:13:00 PM
Thanks Michael, I'm on my way to see what you have come up with.
Date: 9/26/2015 5:19:00 AM
This is so lovely Richard. I am very fond of how much can be expressed with this Etheree form. 7
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/26/2015 6:47:00 AM
I enjoyed writing this one. Thanks Connie.
Date: 9/26/2015 12:59:00 AM
Oh....that ending line, so fine...sublime....which it were mine! :) Hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/26/2015 6:48:00 AM
Thanks and hugs Eileen.
Date: 9/25/2015 1:46:00 PM
Very loving Richard.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/25/2015 4:03:00 PM
Thanks Tim.
Date: 9/25/2015 12:53:00 PM
- Lovely Angel poem in Etheree form, Richard (I must try me too once, I like this form) - I been little time on "soup" in recent weeks :) - Lots to do :) - But, enjoy your poems tonight :) - Best wishes for the weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/25/2015 10:52:00 AM
wonderful etheree narrating tender words of true love.
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Date: 9/25/2015 10:49:00 AM
Very powerful emotions are allowed to burn their way through your thoughts and smolder within our heart. Emile.
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