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And This Autmn Day

And this autumn day shall slide, As ice across a large, lonely pond. And be from your life, forever gone. And yet, its sensuality will still abide. As the sun sets warm and hot beyond. And you sit alone, with dreams, forlorn. 9/26/2022 ~1~

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Date: 9/27/2022 6:41:00 AM
I love Autumn Pangie. We are experiencing cooler weather now and thankful for it. Nice representative poem of when it leaves us with its memories. Linda
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/27/2022 11:09:00 AM
Hi Linda, thanks for commenting on the poem in addition to expressing your.feelings about Autumn. Thank heavens we have golden memories. Life goes by so fast! Pangie
Date: 9/27/2022 12:17:00 AM
I know not everyone likes autumn but its my favourite season, I find it quite peaceful. Tom
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Date: 9/27/2022 11:02:00 AM
We used to be able to burn piles of leaves in Autumn when I was a girl. But not anymore. They even stopped burning logs in fireplaces. I think autumn is great! In the Midwest, very colorful. Spring and Autumn are best!I am no snow bunny nor sun worshipper. Panagiota xx
Date: 9/26/2022 10:37:00 AM
A beautiful poem about Fall. It is such a colorful Season. Enjoyed this one.
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Date: 9/26/2022 10:56:00 AM
Fall is outstanding…it is the Gateway to religious and Secular holidays. It is already Rosh Hashana, Jewish New Year. Mazel Tov! Happy New Year! Yom Kippur, Day of Atonement, is next week. Hugs, Pangie xx
Date: 9/26/2022 9:11:00 AM
Contemplative loneliness, sensuality and warmth. Beautiful, Pangie!
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Date: 9/26/2022 10:23:00 AM
You warm my autumnal heart, Kim. I love your adjectives. And a gift from you, to describe this as “beautififul.” Thank you. Hugs, Pangie xx
Date: 9/26/2022 9:05:00 AM
We so miss dear lovers. Miss youth, but not all of it. I hear you. "And yet, its sensuality will still abide. As the sun sets warm and hot beyond."
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Date: 9/26/2022 10:20:00 AM
Happy Monday, Prince! You got that right on the money! It’s a miracle to me, the rivers of sensuality rise and never fall.like the sun, they remain….seering in blood amd consciousness. Hello also to your Pricess! Hugs, Pangie xx
Date: 9/26/2022 8:13:00 AM
This Autumn day stirs emotions in the one experiencing your delicate words Pangie. Wonderful read. Very special to read. It evokes feelings in your heart. A favorite...
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Date: 9/26/2022 8:56:00 AM
Dearest Michael! I was not going to post this….But I really like d it. There is a mysterious quality about it, and as you said..and very subtle, stirring one’s soul! Glad it is a favorite of yours.you made my day. Hugs, Pangie xx

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