Premiere Contest WinnerAn Unwanted Guest

I met the old gent as his last nickle was spent
In a seven card game of stud poker
You could see he had skill by the straights he could fill
He never even needed the joker

He lost just the same and said he knew who to blame
He'd had an unwelcome guest since last Fall
Lady Luck had dwelt in his guest house as he dealt
But in Autumn Bad Luck had come to call

He said he ain't won since this Bad Luck had begun
And he tried all he knew to make him leave
Still he stayed in his house just quiet as a mouse
And then laughed at the chaos he could weave

Well, I left him there with the trials that he must bear
And moved on to card games in other towns
Now and then I heard that there had been no new word
'Bout the fate of that gambler's ups and downs

One day if you please in a town they call Notrees
I met him again in a game of draw
He cleaned us all out, left us all with no doubt
He had gotten rid of his only flaw

I said how'd you do it he said nothin' to it
I watched TV until Bad Luck got bored
So my unwelcome guest thought that it would be best
If he moved down the road in his old Ford

2/24/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Martin Avatar
April 12, 2017 at 8:51 AM
Must remember this - if I have a run of bad luck, watch TV! Excellent poem and congratulations on your win! :-)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 16, 2017 at 3:41 PM
Great, Larry! Congrats!
Hamilton Avatar
March 16, 2017 at 8:50 AM
Love the rhymes Larry, well done, congrats on a fine win!
Smith Avatar
March 11, 2017 at 9:56 AM
No surprise on my face to see you at the top of the list, congratulations Larry...
Godwin Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 10:35 AM
VERY good - I enjoyed the read so much and congratulate you on your win! All the best ... CayCay
White Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 1:28 AM
Wow, congratulations with the trophy, so wonderful! That story is special, and I enjoyed it.
Roberts Avatar
March 5, 2017 at 3:31 PM
congrats on a fine win....Seren
Bradfield Avatar
March 5, 2017 at 8:50 PM
Thank you, Seren
Allison Avatar
March 5, 2017 at 12:00 PM
Great story Larry... I'm glad it was a happy ending:-)Congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Bradfield Avatar
March 5, 2017 at 8:54 PM
Thank you, Jan!..Larry
Krampe Avatar
March 5, 2017 at 7:16 AM
Congrats on your win, Larry. Nice storytelling.
Bradfield Avatar
March 5, 2017 at 8:55 PM
Thank you, Agnes!!
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