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An Unwanted Guest Premiere Contest Winner

I met the old gent as his last nickle was spent In a seven card game of stud poker You could see he had skill by the straights he could fill He never even needed the joker He lost just the same and said he knew who to blame He'd had an unwelcome guest since last Fall Lady Luck had dwelt in his guest house as he dealt But in Autumn Bad Luck had come to call He said he ain't won since this Bad Luck had begun And he tried all he knew to make him leave Still he stayed in his house just quiet as a mouse And then laughed at the chaos he could weave Well, I left him there with the trials that he must bear And moved on to card games in other towns Now and then I heard that there had been no new word 'Bout the fate of that gambler's ups and downs One day if you please in a town they call Notrees I met him again in a game of draw He cleaned us all out, left us all with no doubt He had gotten rid of his only flaw I said how'd you do it he said nothin' to it I watched TV until Bad Luck got bored So my unwelcome guest thought that it would be best If he moved down the road in his old Ford 2/24/2017

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Date: 4/12/2017 8:51:00 AM
Must remember this - if I have a run of bad luck, watch TV! Excellent poem and congratulations on your win! :-)
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Date: 3/16/2017 3:41:00 PM
Great, Larry! Congrats!
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Date: 3/16/2017 8:50:00 AM
Love the rhymes Larry, well done, congrats on a fine win!
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Date: 3/11/2017 9:56:00 AM
No surprise on my face to see you at the top of the list, congratulations Larry...
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Date: 3/6/2017 10:35:00 AM
VERY good - I enjoyed the read so much and congratulate you on your win! All the best ... CayCay
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Date: 3/6/2017 1:28:00 AM
Wow, congratulations with the trophy, so wonderful! That story is special, and I enjoyed it.
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Date: 3/5/2017 3:31:00 PM
congrats on a fine win....Seren
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 3/5/2017 8:50:00 PM
Thank you, Seren
Date: 3/5/2017 12:00:00 PM
Great story Larry... I'm glad it was a happy ending:-)Congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 3/5/2017 8:54:00 PM
Thank you, Jan!..Larry
Date: 3/5/2017 7:16:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Larry. Nice storytelling.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 3/5/2017 8:55:00 PM
Thank you, Agnes!!

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