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An Unusual Occurence In New York

The sky turns white something is falling from the heavens The population of the metropolis is momentarily stunned Do I detect an unusual feeling amongst the masses? Something is definitely "coming down" Do you realize what games this life has played with us? Deep sleep will now erase everything The grace of our homes lies in the strength of its inhabitants The winds will blow whatever way they think best to them Our hope lies in the remnants of what was Amidst the ruins We can build an altar Watch smoke rise upwards Enjoy the game while we still have the stength and wit to withstand all attacks upon us and our creations and legacy

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/21/2011 4:27:00 AM

I am stopping by this morning to read your amazing poetry, and to thank you for your kind comments on mine Matthew. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/13/2011 9:45:00 PM

wow! Matthew, deep feelings among New York.. the connection to your poem and what new yourk goes through is an unusual event that no one saw comming... like the wind and weather.. enjoyed your poem,,.p.d....

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/13/2011 8:42:00 PM

I'm with Pettit down here. I think this can have more than one meaning and I find it very interesting reading. Oh, wow, I wish they would play The King's Speech in our theaters.IT's the ONE show that is up for Golden Globe which I have not seen. DANG! Did you see BlackSwan? Luv,Andrea

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/10/2011 8:00:00 AM

Matthew, this poem can be interpreted in more ways than one. It is a good ensemble of descriptive words. Can I presume you are describing the World Trade Center attacks of 2001?

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/9/2011 1:42:00 PM

Bluefish are fun to catch, Matthew, and my late huband for a time held the record for the largest bluefish caught on the Jersey shore. Yes, my tiger shark story is true and we old sailors have lots of such stories to share. Thanks for your comment. I hope you enjoy the book. I think you'll receive it this coming week. Love, Carolyn

Autumn Page

Date: 1/8/2011 8:47:00 PM

I love the flow of your poetry. Creates a beautiful image. Love this write.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/6/2011 2:21:00 PM

At first I was thinking snowfall, then the collapse of the twin towers or another act of terrorism. Very compelling poem, Matthew. I just arrived in Ormond Beach and first thing I did was pick up my mail and put your book in the mail. You should get it soon! This is quaite a thought-provoking write ass we "enjoy the game" as attacks are made. Brilliant writing! Love, Carolyn