An Ode to Hunting Dogs

The rolling, hollow, baying sounds cascading from the fen,
'cause there's a bobcat up a tree and the dogs are loose again.
The cat suddenly settles, and the hunting pack goes quiet.
A man whistles to call them, but these rowdy dogs won't buy it.

Like men in a private club, they quietly wait by the tree.
The cat observes his options, wondering how he will get free.
A twig snaps, there's movement. and the dogs return to full bay.
The cat jumps down into the marsh, and finally gets away.

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Date: 7/10/2024 6:18:00 AM
The bobcat is quite cautious. Fate also was in its favor. Enjoyed this tale of the cat escaping from the pack of hunting dogs
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 7/10/2024 9:06:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 5/12/2024 5:02:00 AM
Clever poems. And they rhyme!
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 5/12/2024 5:41:00 AM
Thank you. Rhyme helps my thought process.
Date: 11/22/2023 10:37:00 AM
Great storytelling once again and another poem that rhymes and flows so well..
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 11/22/2023 2:00:00 PM
Thank you for the compliment
Date: 11/19/2023 10:14:00 AM
Very intense confrontation in your poetry, Hilda. Perfect rhyming and an engaging poetry, my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 11/19/2023 11:00:00 AM
Thank you. Dogs are very interesting.
Date: 11/18/2023 7:06:00 PM
I really like your simile, "Like men in a private club, they quietly wait by the tree." Wonderful portrayal of those hunting dogs!! ~ Jeeves, the butler
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 11/18/2023 7:28:00 PM
Thank you. Who is Jeeves?
Date: 11/17/2023 11:29:00 PM
Engaging and melodic. Like Ink I am glad the cat got away.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 11/18/2023 2:20:00 PM
Thank you for the comment. You sound as though you are also an animal lover.
Date: 11/17/2023 8:05:00 AM
This is so deep, cats are so intelligent and quick to sense things, i love the way you’ve written this in such a descriptive manner dear Hilda, beautiful rhymes too, very well crafted. I especially love the ending. Pleasure reading you always. Sending you light always
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 11/17/2023 9:47:00 AM
Thank you. I agree. It's the chase that counts. Cats should always get away.
Date: 11/17/2023 5:15:00 AM
A captivating and masterfully composed piece of poetry, sprinkled with witticisms and culminating in a charming ending, Hilda.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 11/17/2023 5:19:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 11/16/2023 6:57:00 PM
Highly entertaining.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 11/16/2023 7:08:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 11/15/2023 7:31:00 PM
Reminds me of coon hunting with a pack of blue tick hounds. I love to listen to them. Its easy to tell when they have one treed. Good stuff, Hilda:)
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 11/16/2023 3:55:00 PM
Hunters are great dogs. They're a little stubborn, but so am I. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 11/13/2023 12:38:00 PM
Very exciting write! Well done. Yep, I could see the smart cat, and the yapping dogs. Hear the howls. They would have greatly regretted had the cornered that clawing feline.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 11/13/2023 11:44:00 PM
Thank you for reading this one. Dogs are close to my heart. Cats, too.
Date: 11/11/2023 2:05:00 PM
This one brought a smile to my face, Hilda! Well done! Bob H
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 11/11/2023 5:58:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 11/11/2023 12:28:00 PM
An interesting, well crafted poem, with traces of humor and a delightful ending. :)
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 11/11/2023 5:56:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 11/11/2023 1:30:00 AM
Considering that it is almost tame, one is glad it escaped. Blessings.
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 11/16/2023 1:22:00 AM
No bobcats in Malta.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 11/11/2023 9:51:00 AM
Bobcats are quite a bit smaller than mountain lions. Possibly they exist in Malta? A bobcat can put up quite a fight. Don't pet them.
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