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It was a day like no other bright summer day, a day of incredible love full of blessings. Another day of uncontrollable passion, still very young embracing each other's dreams. He came close, and I met his gaze; his voice just above a whisper, "You know I want you as mine. No other love can warm my heart now that I've known the comfort of your arms." Tomorrow came and went, and no sign of my betrothal. They came and swept him away during the night as they said, "You belong to another." I curled up, the doors to the world seemed closed; nothing seemed to lift the graying shadows. I fought not to cling to the darkness of my dreams. Determined not to wake because I'd have to face the unraveling of what I was running away from. Heaven came into my life, then was taken away leaving a soul that's barely breathing. I shiver and watch the sunshine rise, as waves ripple over autumn leaves. 7/16/2018

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Date: 7/30/2018 2:26:00 PM
Congratulations! Well written and beautiful ending lines.
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Date: 7/30/2018 1:15:00 PM
Eve, that was sad but so beautiful!!!
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Date: 7/27/2018 4:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Sad poem of love lost. Enjoyed.
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Date: 7/25/2018 7:12:00 PM
So sadly beautiful and well-written, Eve. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/25/2018 1:29:00 PM
Back to wish you congratulations on your well-deserved win!
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Date: 7/24/2018 1:05:00 PM
Such a beautiful this is, full of emotions and I really enjoyed reading it, many congratulations on your wonderful 2nd position in the contest, good luck and have a really nice day
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Date: 7/19/2018 2:38:00 PM
Every heart sings a song, incomplete until another heart whispers back... Beautiful
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Date: 7/19/2018 1:22:00 PM
The love only accrued. By reading this, it remains, what to do with it is the pain. This is Good!
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Date: 7/19/2018 11:00:00 AM
Hi Eve, Excellent content in this incomplete love story. Deep emotions swimming through the heart of your words. You unlock this readers emotions. Good luck in the contest. Have a wonderful Thursday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 7/19/2018 9:07:00 AM
Melancholy and beautiful Eve! I can feel the pain, well done xxoo
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Date: 7/18/2018 8:05:00 AM
Love the depth of feeling here, in this wonderful poetry.
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Date: 7/17/2018 11:23:00 PM
touchy. So emotional. So romantic. So beautifully expressed in your pen. Love.
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Date: 7/17/2018 2:53:00 PM
so moved by this wonderful poem filled with heartfelt lines, eve... huggs
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Date: 7/17/2018 2:48:00 PM
Especially poignant how you describe time passing in the last line of autumn leaves-
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Date: 7/17/2018 5:14:00 AM
The memories of uncomplete love are painful Eve, they stay with you for ever.
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Date: 7/16/2018 11:53:00 PM
and you know, I always love a love story!!!!
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/17/2018 12:03:00 AM

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