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An Evil War They walk the plains of sun-dried grass, together in a row; the mothers, with their young ones, pass to search for food and go for miles with thirst to find a drink; as dry season appears. They walk along, each one in sync, alert with eyes and ears. On different paths, the males walk too to feed as they patrol, and somehow they, with inner clue, all find a water hole. And peacefully they live their days, adapt to nature's reign that serves them well to drink and graze and procreate their strain. But space in their domain is less... encroached by humankind, uncaring of the crowding stress they leave on them behind. Still worse, they have become aware of threats of crueler kind, and learned to watch, to hide, beware of horrors which they find. So oft they see a sight disturbed... sprawled out along their path; a member of their precious herd... they trumpet loud with wrath. They stop and mourn like humans do, stand vigil, shocked and chilled; caress the faceless friend they knew... who for his tusks...was killed. Sandra M. Haight ~1st Place~ Premiere Contest: Evil Is Everywhere Sponsor: Brian Davey Judged: 10/08/2016 BBC News: The War On Elephants: April 28, 2016 "Bloated and eerily upright the large adult elephant was still standing where it had been killed - just next to the stream - its face hacked off....It had been fleeing the carnage in the mud 100m or so away, where the remains of four other adults and one young elephant lay fallen and disfigured, their tusks and trunks all taken for ivory and meat. Like a macabre statue, this faceless animal stood as a landmark to the horrors of poaching, of the ivory trade, and of the mass slaughter of the last remaining elephants in central Africa... “It's worth so much more than just the animals. It's about trying to stabilise a whole region which has been unstable for decades. It's about trying to basically build peace. And that is why we wake up every morning, why everyone fights this war, and why we try and save the elephants. It's about basically saving Congo. On 23 April 2016, three rangers were killed in a fresh clash with poachers. Park manager Erik Mararv and another ranger were badly injured."

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Date: 10/9/2016 10:07:00 PM
Congrats on 1st place on this so long standing contest! :) Indeed what can be more horrible than horrors! :(
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Date: 10/9/2016 2:16:00 AM
A very heart touching poem as I have a soft corner for these majestic beings and it's almost same with the others too, I especially mean the big cats, the way they are being treated in captivity is just horrible. No wonder why they are close to extinction. Such cruelty needs to be stopped. Very glad that you addressed this issue with such a wonderful poem. Congrats, Sandra.
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Date: 10/8/2016 6:17:00 PM
This is a shame. So glad you brought light on it with a well written poem. Congratulations on your trophy win and blessiings. janis
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Date: 10/8/2016 11:03:00 AM
So glad such a fitting tribute to these wonderful creatures receives reward. Congratulations Sandra...
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/8/2016 1:47:00 PM
Thank you very much, Charlie, for your visit, kind comment and congrats. I appreciate your support as always. Sandra
Date: 10/8/2016 7:30:00 AM
I apologize to everyone that this took so long...I have no excuse but that I had lost my muse and it was a pain to read or write for so long! Please forgive me! Sandra this was simply amazing, thank you and congratulations
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Date: 10/8/2016 1:46:00 PM
No problem on the delay, Brian...I knew you'd get to it eventually! I am humbled and honored to have earned this trophy win for my poem! Thank you so much for that, and for offering a most inspiring contest and them. Sandra
Date: 6/24/2016 3:08:00 PM
So sad, all this poaching of wild animals.Only a handful of theme are left now.Its a powerful and sad poem Sandra!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/24/2016 3:40:00 PM
Thank you, Sara, for your positive comments. Yes, this is a very sad and horrible thing that happens to these poor elephants. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 6/24/2016 2:57:00 PM
What an excellent write Sandra, hope it does well in the contest. Very very sad situation for these remarkable animals, that they mourn and feel the loss is especially touching.A7
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/24/2016 3:39:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by and reading my poem, John, and for the positive comments and 7. Yes, a very sad situation indeed...Sandra
Date: 6/24/2016 11:40:00 AM
Bravo Sandra - I watched some of the the programme and I found it so distressing - I cannot find words to describe the actions of these mercenary poachers - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/24/2016 3:36:00 PM
Thank you, Jan, it is very sad. They say that many are killed every day. Hard to understand...Hugs, Sandra
Date: 6/24/2016 9:28:00 AM
Bravo!! A magnificent write Mrs. Sandra. There are no words to describe the effects of greed on our society. There will always be a black market for everything. Good luck in the contest. A7 for sure.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/24/2016 3:31:00 PM
Thank you for your supportive comments, and the wonderful 7, Daniel. Yes, this is so sad indeed. Sandra

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