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You dance love, and you dance joy and you dance dreams."
- Gene Kelly
I am lost in an endless dream My love and I are together Dancing hand in hand, we're a team Like the zephyr and a feather Swirling and swaying to the beat We are caught up in love's sweet trance To the music, tapping our feet Adrift in our fantasy dance.
Embraced in splendour of the night We vowed that we’d twirl evermore Waltzing the dream till morning light Upon earth’s grandiose dance floor Moments too precious to forget Memories stored safely in heart To replay in our mind cassette Forever my cherished sweetheart.
I do not want this dream to end To wake up and find I’m alone But dawn breaks in to apprehend Into the real world, I’m thrown I await night’s darkness to sleep To dream of my love and our dance I am lost in fantasy deep Hope this will last longer perchance.
Bleak since you left my heart and dreams In your arms it felt so real Tears cascade down my face in streams The heartache I cannot conceal Come back to me prince entrancing We’ll waltz to happiness again Dreams are for love and romancing To a melodious refrain. *+*+* 7th April 2023 Collab with Jo Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joanna Daniel

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Date: 5/3/2023 6:22:00 AM
Grat collab Belle. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 5/2/2023 1:03:00 PM
Fantastic piece on dancing, Belle. You and Jo are definitely on the same page dancing together with your pens in hand. Kudos on a fine winning entry.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/2/2023 5:11:00 PM
Thank you so much for those words Reason, they’re very much appreciated… Belle
Date: 5/2/2023 9:46:00 AM
Hello Belle, A towering masterpiece has been rewarded with an apt placement. Your submission has a graceful sweep and magnificent narrative that ebbs and flows with due elegance. Thanks for your review of my entry and the generous insights. I found them extremely helpful Warm regards Howard
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/2/2023 5:07:00 PM
Hello Howard, I’m touched by your delightful review, so kind and encouraging of you. Kindest regards ~ Belle
Date: 5/2/2023 9:15:00 AM
Not only is this as lovely and graceful as the "dance," but your collaboration is seamless! So beautifully and artfully done Belle. Congratulations on your win!!! Blessings on your dance steps!
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/2/2023 4:57:00 PM
Thank you for those lovely kind words Sam, I truly do appreciate your comments. Blessings, Belle
Date: 5/2/2023 9:11:00 AM
This is such a gorgeous collab! I love it and am faving! :) Congratulations!
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/2/2023 4:58:00 PM
Thank you so much Ann, bless you for faving… Belle :)
Date: 5/2/2023 7:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write/picture. Love It. Have a blessed day..................
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/2/2023 4:53:00 PM
Thank you Paula, you have a blessed day too… Belle
Date: 5/2/2023 1:16:00 AM
This is simply superb, Belle, you took my poem to another level:) and I love that pic:) congratulations on your top win:) enjoyed our collab:)
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/2/2023 2:42:00 AM
Thank you so much Joanna, I enjoyed our collab too… Belle
Date: 4/16/2023 6:04:00 AM
I love dance - I love to dance - I love to watch dance - I love to hear dance. Everything beautiful in this poem collaboration Belle. Best wishes for your win in this contest. :)
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/16/2023 7:40:00 AM
Thank you very much Linda, I love dancing too… Belle :)

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