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E Form - Elegy Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France

      

Death has drained my life of joy; my heart is an empty husk. I cannot muster a single smile from the many I've stored in memory; to come to my aid in my time of grief. An emptiness has replaced the love I've lost there is no describing my pain, words fail to capture how I am feeling. A part of me is suddenly missing, and it can never be replaced. You were the foundation that supported me in life my love, my friend, my reason for living. You invited me to lean on you and never bent or complained of the added weight. There will never be another you, you were unique! An angel in mortal guise! A gentler soul never tread this Earth; I was fortunate to have loved you and been loved by you; Death can never take that feeling from me. Time cannot keep us apart for long, I will be joining you soon; I know you'll be waiting for me on the other side. We are soulmates; our love is indelible! Death is but an inconvenience to eternal souls tethered to each other by the ethereal bonds of love.

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Date: 8/7/2024 1:26:00 PM
Emile, congratulations on your win in my contest with this terrific elegy poem, I liked it a lot, well done, like the quote image too, Constance
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/7/2024 3:40:00 PM
Thanks, Constance; I appreciate the placement and your comments, my friend. Emile.
Date: 7/23/2024 5:48:00 PM
"my heart is an empty husk", "A part of me is suddenly missing, and it can never be replaced" - Nostalgic as well as optimistic. Congratulations!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/24/2024 7:12:00 AM
Thanks, Christuraj; as always, I appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.
Date: 7/23/2024 6:47:00 AM
Death is but an inconvenience to eternal souls tethered to each other by the ethereal bonds of love...heartfelt…well done, Emile! Congrats!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/23/2024 7:14:00 AM
Thanks, Kim; as always, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/22/2024 5:49:00 PM
Applause!Adoration! At your feet I throw roses! Tears sprang to my eyes and to bring someone to that state with your words is a power and a gift. Xoxo
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/23/2024 7:14:00 AM
Thanks, Crystol; I appreciate your outstanding, flattering comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/22/2024 11:49:00 AM
Hello Emile, i sense your pain. You were able to find your soulmate. you had a strong love that lasted. She will always be apart of you. Because she is watching you she is your guardian angel. My friend. Enjoy your day. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/22/2024 2:39:00 PM
Hello Emile, You are welcome. enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/22/2024 12:02:00 PM
Thanks, Darlene; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/20/2024 4:16:00 PM
This is heart wrenching. I'm sorry for the loss it expresses, but happy for the firm believe that death can't conquer love. May you find healing
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/21/2024 7:42:00 AM
Thanks, Eileen; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

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