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An Elegant Heron

Along the river bank I strolled Beneath my feet the grass was wet, Company I did not have, nor seek Deep within my thoughts, but yet Elegance, it caught my eye For I chanced to see a heron there, Graceful wings, they slowly opened Heaving her into the air. It seemed to me all far too languid Just how did she fly, thought I. Keenly though, I watched her soaring Lifting, easing to the sky. Entry for A OCTOBER PREMIERE CONTEST any theme, any form, max of 25 lines - Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand 5/10/2017

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Date: 10/7/2017 12:34:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Gary - many Blue Herons and Snowy Egrets here where I live (near the ocean in Maine) ... Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend - wonderful work! :-)
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Gary Smith
Date: 10/7/2017 5:47:00 AM
Thank you Gregory :)
Date: 10/6/2017 7:13:00 PM
Gary, beautiful, congratulations on your win !
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Gary Smith
Date: 10/7/2017 5:46:00 AM
Thank you Broken Wings :)
Date: 10/5/2017 5:03:00 AM
- Not a bird, I know Gary... but seen it on television - A marvel ABC poem :) - If it is for the contest, I wish you good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/5/2017 5:36:00 AM
Thank you Sunshine, I wrote this after watching a heron on the river :)
Date: 10/4/2017 5:30:00 PM
they are such beautiful birds Gary I love to see them in flight but also standing perfectly still whilst they fish:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/4/2017 5:32:00 PM
I see them often where I run Jan, such a graceful bird :)
Date: 10/4/2017 3:57:00 PM
Beautiful Gary! An enjoyable poem to read :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 10/4/2017 3:58:00 PM
Thank you Heidi :)

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