An Autumn Sky Haiku

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Entered for Andrea Dietrich's contest: ''Halfway Through October''

enhancing the autumn sky a billow of clouds

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 2/24/2024 6:35:00 AM

Looks like a form brewing Paul. Lovely write! :)

Paul Callus
Date: 2/28/2024 9:47:00 AM

Thank you so much, Linda. Glad you enjoyed. Best regards // paul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/18/2024 3:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning work. I can see why it was chosen to be on the winners' list. Very descriptive in a few short sentences. I appreciate the visit to my page. Sara K

Paul Callus
Date: 1/19/2024 6:14:00 AM

Thank you for the lovely comments & congrats, Sara. Hope you'll have an enjoyable weekend // paul

Lisa Ricci

Date: 1/12/2024 5:51:00 AM

Good Morning Paul. Your chosen words and theme have lasting imagery. Your voice and tone are wonderful. Thank you for sharing your skilled talent. Have a wonderful morning and day. Blessings and Peace (smile)

Paul Callus
Date: 1/13/2024 1:45:00 AM

Thank you for stopping by with such delightful comments, Lisa...and you certainly put a smile on my face :) Have a lovely weekend. Warm regards & Blessings, my friend // paul

Bill Baker

Date: 11/21/2023 2:23:00 PM

Nice Haiku, Paul. I like the description and the photo you chose to go with your poetry. I want to congratulate you on having three of your poems published in Poetry Soup's latest Anthology! YEAH !!! Have a great week, my friend, and Happy Thanksgiving! Bill

Paul Callus
Date: 11/24/2023 10:47:00 AM

Thank you, Bill. Glad you enjoyed this little offering...and I appreciate your noticing my published poems. ~ Happy weekend and hope Thanksgiving has been lovingly spent with family. Regards // paul

Daniel Turner

Date: 11/6/2023 6:13:00 PM

Great time of year for cloud watching. I like this one, Paul. Hoping you are well old friend:) I know you're a busy man. Take care!

Paul Callus
Date: 11/7/2023 2:08:00 PM

Thank you for stopping by my friend. You are right...I am busy, but it's time to start slowing down! Best regards // paul

Judy Ball

Date: 11/2/2023 5:14:00 AM

I love the clouds. I love watching them change shape. Lovely. God Bless, JB

Paul Callus
Date: 11/2/2023 6:07:00 AM

I love watching clouds, too, Judy, whether they hurry past or else take it slow. I can spend hrs watching them changing shape. For us writers they can offer much inspiration. Thank you for visiting and God bless, my friend. // paul