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An Audience

An audience in the overhanging trees glean upon the sight darkening light appease. Free spirit blotting out the sun shortly ease; dancing image in the shady shadow seize. Glean upon the sight darkening light appease; nesting birds departing and upward release. Dancing image in the shady shadow seize. with the assist of teasing most fickle breeze. Nesting birds departing and upward release reaching out to touch the outspread wings ~ shall please, with the assist of teasing most fickle breeze. as they cry breaking the angst silence unease. Reaching out to touch the outspread wings ~ shall please, free spirit blotting out the sun shortly ease; as they cry breaking the angst silence unease an audience in the overhanging trees. 12/19/2019 A Monorhyme Pantoum

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Date: 12/26/2019 6:54:00 PM
Superb monorhyme, Eve:-) Loved it! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 12/26/2019 5:25:00 PM
Eve gorgeous win my friend!;)
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Date: 12/26/2019 4:02:00 PM
Well done Eve, I normally don't enjoy Mono rhymes or Pantoum's but enjoyed this one enough to be included, congrats on a fine placement!
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Date: 12/20/2019 7:15:00 PM
this is very beautiful and I see you did all the same rhyme. Wow, Eve. Also, thanks so much for my placement in your contest and the inspiration to do a pantoum on seagulls.
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Date: 12/20/2019 5:44:00 PM
Lovely write
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Date: 12/20/2019 2:56:00 PM
What a gorgeous monorhyme pantoum Eve! Well done! I would take off my hat to you if I was wearing one.
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Date: 12/20/2019 11:33:00 AM
Oh wow, wonderfully lovely. Amazing.
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Date: 12/20/2019 9:29:00 AM
A form I struggle with Eve, well composed verse. Tom
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Date: 12/20/2019 7:05:00 AM
Your words paint imagery that floats by in your poem Eve. Lovely lines like: An audience in the overhanging trees ...and...dancing image in the shady shadow seize. You wrote this beautifully-- in this hard to write form.
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Date: 12/20/2019 2:57:00 AM
Great imagery.. Beautifully rendered..
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Date: 12/19/2019 11:20:00 PM
I love your fun use of words... Ann
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