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*Image of Worm On Leaf by Pixabay. an act of autumn rustling leaves tumble nest of starved younglings screeching~ crawling goes exposed 2022 September 07 *1st Place* Autumn in Nature - Haiku ~~Tania Kitchin: Judged 2022 September 17 *HMS; 5,7,5.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/30/2022 1:35:00 PM

Poor worm but lucky hatchlings. I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Congratulations on your win. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page with congratulations and letting me know I placed in your contest. Sara

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/1/2022 1:16:00 PM

I welcome the pleasantries, Sara, that you've shared with kind praises my friend, Aloha William

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/22/2022 6:46:00 PM

Dear William, you’ve captured the Autumn season with striking and unique imagery. Congratulations for your excellent placement in Tania’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/23/2022 9:44:00 AM

I am grateful, Susan, for your heartfelt focus and considerations my friend, Aloha William

Eve Roper

Date: 9/20/2022 6:27:00 PM

Great image, William. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Blessings my friend

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/20/2022 6:37:00 PM

Thank you, Eve, for your wondrous view and cheers my friend, Aloha William

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2022 4:06:00 PM

well done. Congrats to you!

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/20/2022 4:58:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea, you're excellent reminder of Connie my friend, Aloha William

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 9/20/2022 3:57:00 AM

Congratulations William, on you first place win. Unique take on Autumn exposing the hidden parts of nature. Best SuZ

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/20/2022 7:24:00 AM

Thank you, Suzanne, for your sentiments are greatly appreciated my friend, Aloha William

Md Johnson

Date: 9/18/2022 8:07:00 AM

Congratulations! Enjoyed your unique take on this cycle of Autumn. Best regards —MDJ

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/18/2022 8:59:00 AM

Thank you, MD, for your well-worded acclamation my friend, Aloha William

Ann Peck

Date: 9/18/2022 7:57:00 AM

Congratulations on First Place for your lovely Haiku!

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/18/2022 8:50:00 AM

Thank you, Ann, for your admirable recognition my friend, Aloha William

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/18/2022 7:25:00 AM

Congratulations for your win Hilo :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/18/2022 8:47:00 AM

Thank you, Heidi, for your welcoming laudation my friend, Aloha William

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/18/2022 6:58:00 AM

Beautifully crafted. Congratulations on your win! Linda

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/18/2022 8:46:00 AM

Thank you, Linda, for you honor me immensely my friend, Aloha William

Christuraj Alex

Date: 9/17/2022 7:33:00 PM

"rustling leaves tumble" - beautiful. Congratulations!

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/17/2022 8:16:00 PM

Thank you, Christuraj, for your highlight and praise my friend, Aloha William

Tania Kitchin

Date: 9/17/2022 4:21:00 PM

William, congratulations on your first place win with your vivid haiku!

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/17/2022 8:13:00 PM

I appreciate the placement, Tania, I had fun writing this piece my friend, Aloha William

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 9/8/2022 10:59:00 PM

Makes me think of worms crawling in the dirt, and mama bird collects them for her young - but more poetically put of course~

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/9/2022 9:39:00 AM

Thank you, Michelle, less oxygenic soil after a rainfall, earthworms unearth themselves, and drying leaves becomes less protective with breaths of autumnal winds -- yours is an admirable share as always my friend, Aloha William