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An Accident on a Hot Summer Day

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December.12.2024
A Grounding Technique Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Sara Kendrick
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I see the blue sky White clouds floating high Sun over my head Trees, in wind swaying Golden leaves dropping I feel the heat My body’s sweat Hot kiss on skin My body’s spin Hear a cry Wheels rumbling Horns blaring Smell blood Ointment Tears.

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Date: 12/31/2024 11:10:00 AM
Belated congrats on this heart wrenching poem.
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Date: 12/18/2024 8:37:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write/story again. Have a Blessed Day with your wonderful win. Have A Very Blessed Merry Christmas..........
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Date: 12/16/2024 8:55:00 PM
dashing..Congratulations dear poet. Cheers!!!
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Date: 12/16/2024 9:14:00 AM
- Great written, Valsa ... congratulations :) - hugs
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Date: 12/16/2024 6:23:00 AM
Thank you, Valsa, for your fine work in my contest. I appreciate your support by writing one. Sara K
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Date: 12/16/2024 9:38:00 PM
You're most welcome dear Sara. Instead of you thanking me, I must thank you. It was a pleasure taking part in your contest.
Date: 12/12/2024 10:31:00 PM
Wow. A really good job with the sensory images, Valsa.
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Date: 12/12/2024 3:32:00 PM
You sense the accident coming as you describe the conditions leading to it. Well done Dear Lady. Thanks for sharing...
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Date: 12/12/2024 11:03:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write/story. The heat can make one very sick. I did it a few times...  "Good Luck" I also did this one. Have a blessed day writing away..............
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Date: 12/12/2024 9:53:00 AM
Great poem in the format.
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Date: 12/12/2024 6:56:00 AM
I am transfered by your poem with such a surprise ending. It represents life with its yin yang course. Shocked, but your poem is timely for our decade. Good write.
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Date: 12/12/2024 6:38:00 AM
Yikes, sounds like someone came a cropper, reminds me of the time I fell of my bike going down a hill and split the side of my head open. I lived to tell the tale lol. Good luck in the contest Valsa. Tom
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