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Amid the Jagged Shadows

"Amid the jagged shadows of mossy leafless boughs; " Samuel Taylor Coleridge
barren branches spray woe amongst nude fears- touching rough twigs with ease; and in the trading of desires I realized I was… FA LL IN G down into redemption’s abyss, calling deception’s bliss broken heart worn in solitude, I go towards the light… I go ~ I go I strike like lightning, free willed and manic across universes of sorrow; I am frightening, I am frightening. I am lone- without tomorrow cascading veins of black, downward into depths o’ so deep even hell holds no key; I beg and I plea... I plea ~ I plea for joy has been my debris barren branches spray woe amongst nude fears- pretending I am letting go; desires traded joy for my tears
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ November 25, 2019 Writing Challenge 3, November - Any Form Sponsor, Dear Heart - Wisshkobi Ode

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Date: 12/5/2019 6:14:00 PM
Lu, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this beautiful poem!
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Date: 12/4/2019 12:50:00 PM
- Congratulations so much on your winning poem, L.L. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/4/2019 3:21:00 AM
Wow Luloo, this is outstanding! Congratulations on your well deserved First Placement! xxoo
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Date: 12/3/2019 8:27:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Lu Loo
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Date: 12/3/2019 6:45:00 PM
very creative and powerful Lu Loo... congratulations :) hugs
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Date: 12/3/2019 5:56:00 PM
See what did I tell ya! Congrats!!
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Date: 12/3/2019 11:54:00 AM
Ahhh Laura I knew you would place high! Congratulations on your1st place!;)
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Date: 11/25/2019 4:31:00 PM
This is fantastic Laura, Constance will surely love it as do I!
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Date: 11/25/2019 10:06:00 AM
Very nice Lu Loo this will go high on the list. Thanks for sharing this
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