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This write is primeraly about the change happening as The Christian base, for that which built America seems to be Fading away? 'the whole land it appears has become challenged' Maybe the way out is through a spiritual struggle? And A step away from macro governance? I do not advocate Violence. ' I am against wars.! They are the prime cause Of upheaval, and displacment, we will always have a Struggle even with our own selves! until the day of our Lords reign, we will never be truly whole ' for referrance i use The word idle ( to draw inferrance from idol and idyll the first From the t v show and the other as in the regular meaning of idyll.'
Why are 'the states' in such a state? On a teeter-totter' Of neglect, and fate.? A stateles place an oxymoron? With a surging mass they, can't shut the door on.? Yet the source is not from accross far lands, it springs From a fountain, more near at hand' along foul halls It seems to run.? down from a 'big house' a'wash in scum It needs a clean up I hear some say, on tv and radio just By the way.' There are fifty states under 'a sun' that could Dry this place.' And work could get done?.'either at the Border' or too 'cap it all' in response to the many dis-stress Calls.' governments seem always to want people.' to pitch Up and mend some fences or steeples.' It was one if by Land! And that place was needed.' To show either lamp' a A strong church building.' Then you can climb the ramp.' Of life, it leads to adventure, and yes there's some strife? a Fight' Away from old money, emperors and kings and those other More certain things..Away from poverty and the foreign influence Rings? Unto a plain; a place thats clear where vision can Focus, on what is dear' on liberty good life, freedom and people Who can.' welcome others to sound reality, a place of safety Of equal chance, where theres work and rest, a place to Advance, in peace through strength, and human accord Could this be achieved. Or are all? just simply too bored.?

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Date: 2/1/2024 1:36:00 PM
I beleive now.? That biden is being used as a Status symbol..By those who are showing their (Strength?) By getting him in office its like an in the face of those more balanced people.' And At the end of any consideration, there is the Shouting and name calling ( which comes mostly from people who identify as progressive I'm not ( big into labels anyway) thanks for the Stop by.- '
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Date: 1/31/2024 10:52:00 PM
The situation here will become .more and more dire. I feel like I live in the twilight zone when I watch the lied on the news channels. So sad our president is puppet for evil doers.
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Date: 2/1/2024 1:49:00 PM
Well I have replied in a comment Box Andrea. its just like me To take a wrong turn on the page..I was thinking about 'the man of lawlessnes Andrea and All at once i recalled 'the rules of the scamdemic' do you remember they always talked of Rules (it was because what they did was not) LAWFUL..) Do ya Get me.?
Date: 1/31/2024 11:32:00 AM
Too bored and/or lazy! Too lazy for the Good Book’s wisdom. Men wants to try his own way again and again (and call that freedom) and all fail again and again…it’s as old as time, time-tested, it ends badly again and again, like we are tumbling in a hot dryer. God’s ways make our paths straight, life is energetic, profound, joyful, honest, etc… Thought-provoking poem!
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Date: 1/31/2024 12:28:00 PM
Thank you Kim I did not put The word lazy, as I'm not American..Thats better put by Americans as I consider things.) Thank you for the input..All blessings in the Lord!
Date: 1/29/2024 7:38:00 PM
Well said, Joe. As great nations go, the US, by comparison to others great throughout recorded history, has fallen a lot sooner, just a couple hundred years...and then, ca-put! My unfounded guesswork only...globalist are working out ways to kill-off 5 or 6 billion people -- to save the planet! The devil smacking his jowls.
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Date: 1/30/2024 8:26:00 AM
Well the devil..And his people? Are quite concerned about the Planets end Joe, it brings home To them the spectre of judgement they ard not trying to Prolong the globes life because They are good like that its because they FEAR and they fear, a Whole lot.' God bless you.'
Date: 1/29/2024 2:20:00 PM
The page is glitching between t v show the...and why? I wonder if it is just my page, if so, I can snapshot it. At any rate, I love the poem and agree. (Idle was a good root for both btw. I think American idolatry of self and apathy has a relationship that is too often coming before God, Country and Family. That which has been eroded and is the root of our current darkness. As far as borders go- the government is a habitual line stepper.
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Date: 1/29/2024 7:19:00 PM
Well yes now that you put that take on borders..? There are more Than physical ones also. Jude in The uk there was the 'pop idol' 2002? show which spawned the others and your American one its amazing to me that 'true poetry has a life of its own' pointing to things the writer didn't notice.! God bless.)
Date: 1/28/2024 3:50:00 PM
I agree...the foundation of American spirituality and Christianity is fading...without the clarity that foundation offers, it's no wonder our country is faltering....appreciate your words...enjoy your evening, Sara
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Date: 1/28/2024 11:31:00 PM
Thank you Sara, I am left wondering jf my write is too Contentious.? Yet its how your Country and its current situation Presents to my awareness.' All blessings may America find the Way.!

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