Amber

i remember you;
giddy little child
with the mona-lisa smile
and sun-burnt hair
as it brushed against
your ivory skin
you were so innocent then

i never saw the sadness
that lingered in your eyes
the depths of green
seemed to pull others in
that hypnotizing glare
hid your pain well

they laughed with you
yet in silence you cried
muffled voice
echoed on walls
where darkness 
subdued your soul

i heard you sold your soul
on the corner
of fifth and main
for a small bag of pleasure
to escape the pain
momentarily
again

a lonely cat
cried by your side
he has nine lives
you've already had ten
yet there you go again
unafraid, stained
with your own blood

the band
still wrapped tight
against your flesh
needle tip
still feeding your veins
as you close your eyes
and rest in shallow breaths

i remember you;
still as the air
that august day
that sunlit hair
against grey skin
blue lips without smile
closed eyes pulling others in
to the depths of your pain
their cheeks stained
with tears
that bore your name
as muffled cries
echoed
by your grave




June 28, 2019
Best free verse 2019 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by John Hamilton
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Devonshire Avatar
January 12, 2020 at 9:49 AM
How sad it must be to know someone as an innocent child and see them struggle with addition as they grow older. A compelling story is being your beautiful poem, Sandra. So glad to see you take a top spot in Brian's contest! Hugs, Carolyn
Adams Avatar
January 12, 2020 at 1:50 PM
Thank you so much...i work around children so watch them grow...watch them succeed and watch them fail... this one is special to me though, as it was my daughter in laws best friend... she was in the wedding and got tangled with the wrong man who brought her into his lifestyle, then left her dead for her parents to find... Thank you so much Carolyn.... hugs
Chiri Avatar
January 11, 2020 at 5:21 PM
Beautiful win my friend! Congratulations!;)
Adams Avatar
January 11, 2020 at 7:15 PM
Thank you Brenda... this one is special to me... :)
Peterson Avatar
June 30, 2019 at 9:49 AM
This one truly tears at my heart and summoned memories of precious ones that slipped between the fingers of those who thought they loved them, only to be found elsewhere at the moment they were needed most. How many friends and lovers I thus lost—alone at the end and shivering in the dark. Because of what you wrote I’ll be watching much more closely now.
Adams Avatar
June 30, 2019 at 11:45 AM
So many young ones leave little signs if one knows what to look for. After she passed and others people say they noticed pleas for help on social media! If this post saves even one life then it was certainly worth the write! Thank you :). Hugs
Chiri Avatar
June 29, 2019 at 8:02 PM
A wonderful write! Congrats on your win!;)
Adams Avatar
June 29, 2019 at 8:07 PM
Thank you so much Brenda :)
Hamilton Avatar
June 29, 2019 at 7:41 PM
This is stunning Sandy, what an amazing write you have, congrats on a top win!
Adams Avatar
June 29, 2019 at 7:45 PM
Thank you John, I wrote this one solely for your contest and it is a very special piece. Thank you for the honor of a top win and for hosting the contest! Hugs :)
Labyrinth Avatar
June 29, 2019 at 8:36 AM
Very sad. You have the gift. Beautifully written, yet very sad. x
Adams Avatar
June 29, 2019 at 9:58 AM
Thank you, i guess she came to mind because her once boyfriend is close with my kids and is fighting septic shock from a surgery and is in bad shape...i was looking on his facebook for updates and saw all his posts to her and how much he missed her...and then the poem came! hugs
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