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i remember you; giddy little child with the mona-lisa smile and sun-burnt hair as it brushed against your ivory skin you were so innocent then i never saw the sadness that lingered in your eyes the depths of green seemed to pull others in that hypnotizing glare hid your pain well they laughed with you yet in silence you cried muffled voice echoed on walls where darkness subdued your soul i heard you sold your soul on the corner of fifth and main for a small bag of pleasure to escape the pain momentarily again a lonely cat cried by your side he has nine lives you've already had ten yet there you go again unafraid, stained with your own blood the band still wrapped tight against your flesh needle tip still feeding your veins as you close your eyes and rest in shallow breaths i remember you; still as the air that august day that sunlit hair against grey skin blue lips without smile closed eyes pulling others in to the depths of your pain their cheeks stained with tears that bore your name as muffled cries echoed by your grave June 28, 2019 Best free verse 2019 Poetry Contest Sponsored by John Hamilton

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Date: 1/12/2020 9:49:00 AM
How sad it must be to know someone as an innocent child and see them struggle with addition as they grow older. A compelling story is being your beautiful poem, Sandra. So glad to see you take a top spot in Brian's contest! Hugs, Carolyn
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/12/2020 1:50:00 PM
Thank you so much...i work around children so watch them grow...watch them succeed and watch them fail... this one is special to me though, as it was my daughter in laws best friend... she was in the wedding and got tangled with the wrong man who brought her into his lifestyle, then left her dead for her parents to find... Thank you so much Carolyn.... hugs
Date: 1/11/2020 5:21:00 PM
Beautiful win my friend! Congratulations!;)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/11/2020 7:15:00 PM
Thank you Brenda... this one is special to me... :)
Date: 6/30/2019 9:49:00 AM
This one truly tears at my heart and summoned memories of precious ones that slipped between the fingers of those who thought they loved them, only to be found elsewhere at the moment they were needed most. How many friends and lovers I thus lost—alone at the end and shivering in the dark. Because of what you wrote I’ll be watching much more closely now.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 6/30/2019 11:45:00 AM
So many young ones leave little signs if one knows what to look for. After she passed and others people say they noticed pleas for help on social media! If this post saves even one life then it was certainly worth the write! Thank you :). Hugs
Date: 6/29/2019 8:02:00 PM
A wonderful write! Congrats on your win!;)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 6/29/2019 8:07:00 PM
Thank you so much Brenda :)
Date: 6/29/2019 7:41:00 PM
This is stunning Sandy, what an amazing write you have, congrats on a top win!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 6/29/2019 7:45:00 PM
Thank you John, I wrote this one solely for your contest and it is a very special piece. Thank you for the honor of a top win and for hosting the contest! Hugs :)
Date: 6/29/2019 8:36:00 AM
Very sad. You have the gift. Beautifully written, yet very sad. x
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Date: 6/29/2019 9:58:00 AM
Thank you, i guess she came to mind because her once boyfriend is close with my kids and is fighting septic shock from a surgery and is in bad shape...i was looking on his facebook for updates and saw all his posts to her and how much he missed her...and then the poem came! hugs

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