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Morning walk by the seashore~ I was here some twenty years ago; Could this be the same sand where I used to walk on with nothing but rainbows of seashells in my mind? This could be different sand, I deem. Yes, it could be different now~ Different sand but still as creamy as it used to be; Pebbles and shells came and washed away by the ebb; The old sand, where did it go? But the new sand is here... Is it the same as the one I used to build my sandcastles? My eyes are hooked on the empty lonesome shell... Where would it have been? Still beautiful though life inside ceased~ Still glistening at the kiss of sunrise. But some shells changed their hues, some lost their luster, some smoothened by the constant friction of the sand, some used by other creatures as dwelling places. Obscure quests enshroud me as the morning sun bathes the shore; I put the empty shell on my palm, feel the bliss of serene vastness of sky and ponder on my most vulnerable moments. Why we, humans are devoid of shell? Why we don't have rainbow-colored skin? I wish a shell grow in us~ so we could give shelter to the roofless folks should we finish our race... Why lies inside us the hardest core? As the wave ripples upon my bare feet I look back to where I've been~ My footprints were washed away by the tide; And as the tepid water goes up on my knees I throw the empty shell to where it should belong. And the rising tide takes the shell Until it fades in my eyes. My quest now clear~ Yes, the shell is just inside us to shield us~ should our innermost chancel~ be hit by truculent arrows; The shell is just inside us for us to feel more with our human skin for we are here~ to touch and to grow. November 4, 2020 Ambedo Poetry Contest Judged:  11/5/2020 5:39:00 AM Sponsored by: Silent One  1st place For "A Meaningful Poem Poetry Contest" Sponsored by Constance La France 1st place Entered for 'Vibrant blissful stillness' Poetry Contest Sponsored by Unseeking Seeker

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Date: 3/30/2021 10:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful story/write. I love the sea, shells, sand and water. Have a blessed day...........
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Date: 3/27/2021 4:58:00 PM
JCB, congratulations on your win in my challenge, A Meaning Poem and that is exactly what you gave me, well done _Constance
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Date: 11/13/2020 9:27:00 PM
Dear JCB, I am enraptured by the beauty of your profound introspection and the wistful artistic expression which flows freely from your shining pen. You inspire me, dear poetess. Your poetic talent and musings run very deep. I love how your thoughts bring me to a bittersweet yet beautiful conclusion. Congratulations for your excellent win in Silent One's Ambedo contest.. ~Susan
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Date: 11/11/2020 8:38:00 AM
Enjoyed this. God bless you with many more
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Date: 11/6/2020 3:55:00 PM
Revisiting - Dear Friend - I really wanted to read this poem many times, until all the beautiful lines sink in. This is a profound piece. I am sure many more similar ones to come. Love, Mala
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Date: 11/6/2020 5:15:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this --- so delightful and delighting from the start to the end, especially "for we are here~ to touch and to grow." God bless you.
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Date: 11/5/2020 3:22:00 PM
wow, so deep and meaningful. You were very well inspired. I am sure you won but I don't know your score . Hope you were in top placements. Congrats to you.
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Date: 11/5/2020 12:56:00 PM
It's a beautifully written, very philosophical poem. Congratulations on your placement
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Date: 11/5/2020 12:12:00 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, JCB :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/5/2020 9:34:00 AM
Congratulations, Dear JCB. This is an excellent poem - written with so much depth and profound philosophy! To my Faves, Dear Friend.
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Date: 11/5/2020 6:23:00 AM
Congrats on your win! We perhaps have a shell but it is an invisible one that creep into when we are in difficulty! enjoyed reading your poem!
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Date: 11/5/2020 5:46:00 AM
Why are we devoid of a shell? Why do we not have a protective shield?? Profound poetry my friend, philosophical and poetic... One of your best poem, which I have read.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest...
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Date: 11/4/2020 4:57:00 AM
- A wonderful poem, JCB ... love the end ... so much truth in your words - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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