Amazing Autumn - the Lanturne Style

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~Amazing Autumn~ (Lanturne Suite) Fall Has come It is here Is in the air Now Say Good-bye To summer Hot weather is Gone Air Crispy Starts to cool No more burning Sun Birds Migrate Butterfly Will return next Year Trees Change garb Leaves trasform From golden to Browns Day To thank God for all Thankgiving Day Is Good Food on table Family God's blessings for All Pies Turkey Cranberry sauce Apple cider Sweet Fall Season Of wonder Enjoy rich change Smile Praise Thank God Fall is great Serenity Brings Mild Weather Azure sky Togetherness Nice Fall Brings calm And repose After summer's Storms. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 Copyright@2009 September.16.2016 ~Author's Notes: The "Lanturne" is a Japanese form or style shaped like a Japanese paper lantern.

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Paloma P

Date: 10/17/2016 10:01:00 AM

Well-suited to the season, engaging Lanturne.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/17/2016 11:27:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly Paloma, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you!:)D

Viv Wigley

Date: 10/17/2016 7:07:00 AM

A lovely Lanturne, Dorian, very appropriate. Viv x

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/17/2016 11:27:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly Viv, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you!:)D

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/16/2016 5:46:00 PM

Beautiful. Thank you

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/17/2016 11:27:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly Heidi, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you!:)D