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Am I Recognisable To Myself

I woke up today, wondering am I another person Am I recognisable to myself, or a different version What can I tell, that makes me not like the others Whilst all around believe, as my character slowly showers I have told many things that I believe to be real Or are they fabrications, and the mental toll now peals When I awaken tomorrow, who do I really see Or will another stranger be standing there as me 'Don't worry Soupers, this is not me' http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/life-12.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/25/2010 3:15:00 PM
It sounds like a multiple personality disorder to me :) or a case of lost and found identities...Cool poem, dear James. Now I have to go and find myself :) Bye!
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Date: 10/25/2010 2:40:00 PM
Hmmm, James, I'm wondering who inspired this write. As you say, it's not about you. People who are not true to themselves often find themselves unable to separate truth from fantasy. Excellent poem! One for my favorites. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/23/2010 11:10:00 AM
But where is James? Please give him back to us:)) Just joking around:) Hugs, Emilia
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Date: 10/23/2010 1:08:00 AM
An inquisitive little verse this James, or is it a reflection from a wonky mirror? 'If we could see ourselves as others see us' comes to mind. My belated thanks for your fleeting visit and comments James. hicky
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Date: 10/22/2010 11:51:00 AM
There you go again Mr. Fraser, divulging who you are..I mean, who you am, or isn't ! Great great write Sir ! much love, james
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Date: 10/21/2010 4:10:00 PM
Reads like one who is a pathological liar..Or one with split personality...Or maybe even borderline personality..Sara
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Date: 10/21/2010 6:57:00 AM
hmmmm, are you trying to make us second guess ourselves on who we think you are? hehe, enjoyed your introspective or maybe not write James :) Wilma
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Date: 10/20/2010 8:08:00 PM
Oh, I believe you are real highlander. Good poem this one. Charles
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Date: 10/20/2010 4:20:00 PM
well I adore you, whomever you are this week. lol, good poem James and thanks for all the kind comments
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Date: 10/20/2010 3:47:00 PM
James, If not you than who? Smiles..... I like this one a lot Thank you As Always, Shar
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Date: 10/20/2010 2:24:00 PM
I'm smiling at this introspective piece, James..I actually used to do this when I was much younger..stand before the mirror and ask, "who are you"!! But I've always been a dreamer anyway..so I'm told.. How are you Highlander? Hope you're well. Love, Audrey
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Date: 10/20/2010 12:07:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work!
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