Get Your Premium Membership

Alvin the Car Salesman

Al pushed to sale the most cars on the lot He came up short, he gave it his best shot Went to a online sales school Paid much, he felt like a fool The class was useless and it was for naught So he studied some tapes of car salesmen One guy stood out and his name was big Glen Big Glen was very good Al thought,” He could, I could The next day poor Al came up short again He left that car lot and he didn’t look back Did not want his boss to give him the sack Took out all his savings Gave in to the cravings Bought car lot up the road with his friend Mack 02/28/2022 Inspired By The Tall Tale Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/3/2022 4:04:00 PM
Haha, Just find another job. Enjoyed.
Login to Reply
Date: 3/1/2022 10:40:00 AM
Wasn't Alvin a chipmunk? Who would buy a car from a squirrel? Enjoyed, Alexis! Aloha!
Login to Reply
Date: 3/1/2022 9:30:00 AM
I love a good story, and your tall tale is interesting and fun, Alexis. Have a blessed day, Evelyn
Login to Reply
Date: 3/1/2022 4:51:00 AM
Very creative theme. Loved the poem, Alexis--especially the ending. This has to win.
Login to Reply
Date: 3/1/2022 4:12:00 AM
Yeah!! Al was very competitive and went for his dream. I hope he sales more from his lot than his competition. Your visit to my page was uplifting. Reads like a good entry for the contest. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 3/1/2022 4:12:00 AM
Interesting tale Alexis. Finally he ended up owning a car. Enjoyed much !
Login to Reply
Date: 3/1/2022 12:21:00 AM
A fantastic tall tale , i enjoyed how you got rhyming names for it. Kudos! <<<<<<<>>>>>>>^^^^^^^>>>>><<<<<<<< Plz read and comment my newest poem too.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/28/2022 9:56:00 PM
He was finally in the driver's seat as his own boss, I enjoyed the read Alexis, best wishes in the contest
Login to Reply
Date: 2/28/2022 9:06:00 PM
so he ends up buying a car lot. That is a tall tale indeed after all his bad luck with selling cars. nicely done
Login to Reply
Date: 2/28/2022 6:04:00 PM
Wow a funny and good for Al! Good luck...I Am Anaya
Login to Reply
Date: 2/28/2022 5:17:00 PM
When at first you don't succeed, try again, I hope it worked the second time around, :)
Login to Reply
Date: 2/28/2022 2:08:00 PM
Wow, Alexis..... Love it.... Now, he works for himself and he could always reach the "quota" lol.....
Login to Reply
Date: 2/28/2022 1:32:00 PM
Alexis, I enjoyed your poem. Nothing like eliminating the competition. Loved the humor. Good luck in the contest. Blessings ~ Debra
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs