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along these lines

ever shut your eyes and glide the free fall of bodily movement with the mind just vapours exploring that other place that you have to run from and to but the trance can be captured and eyes closed, heart beating uninterruptible, yet corruptible by thought alone, you're anyplace held, in ecstasy, by breath or the lack of it then you run out of skips because you haven't paid for Spotify premium and the wrong song wrecks the vibe you've done an hour and it's time to go now #backatthegym

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/10/2025 1:22:00 PM

What a creative write you have here. Love to shut my eyes and glide far away. Peaceful.... Have a lovely day writing away.....

Di11y Da11y
Date: 6/10/2025 1:25:00 PM

Thanks Paula x

I Am Anaya

Date: 6/10/2025 8:56:00 AM

Y e s , I've been in those moments so peaceful D., you caught in that zone, that dopamine along your lines just right. Good to see ya back, poet ~

Di11y Da11y
Date: 6/10/2025 9:58:00 AM

I'm sticking to cross trainer and bike for now x

I Am Anaya
Date: 6/10/2025 9:42:00 AM

zumba moves are quik and erratic on the knees, be careful~

Di11y Da11y
Date: 6/10/2025 9:14:00 AM

Thanks Anaya, I wasn't risking the gym due to an injury, so it was good to be back after missing it for 10 days. I might have to kiss goodbye (aww I'll do it literally too I'm sure) to my biceps maybe - sad times! At least I can keep up with cardio though. Hopefully just a temporary pause though - we'll see!

David Kavanagh

Date: 6/10/2025 8:22:00 AM

Oh I gave up not paying for premium a long time ago, for this very reason, since then I’ve become a serial skipper, shame you were going so well up til that point, not a care in the world uninterruptible and corruptible, how do you find such disparate words, and make them so amenable, A Dilly Dally forte one presumes, brilliant! Cheers David

Di11y Da11y
Date: 6/10/2025 8:31:00 AM

I had all the settings on gentle and was fully in the zone letting my mind drift - with my eyes closed, thinking of little spin off poem ideas I planned to write down. I was having a great time - travelling at speed through the dark, it's quite compelling really :) my Fitbit has chipped in telling me to take it easy though, so whatever the dud song was that snapped me out of it possibly did me a favour :)