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Along Came a Spider

I watched the spider Spin her web soon mate would die Babies will be next! ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I think at one time we have all wished we were like a spider Eat the mate, kids.... Let freedom Ring!

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Date: 6/5/2013 1:23:00 PM
Hi Judy....I've been avoiding all the reads on spiders as I have arachnophobia....Yes! Tis true! :( Anyway...this is a great read. By the way...the female praying mantis also gets to bite off her hubby's head. Wow! Talk about empowered females! Don't know why the message didn't get through! SOUP MAIL! :)
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Date: 6/2/2013 3:06:00 PM
oops meant haiku!!!
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Date: 6/2/2013 3:05:00 PM
this is sure cute! Let me read some more senryu of yours.
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Date: 6/2/2013 6:03:00 AM
- Well done, Judy. - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/1/2013 8:17:00 PM
They don't call it a "black widow" for nothing. Good write as usual.
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Date: 6/1/2013 3:34:00 PM
a delightful 'ku with a strong kireji.. enjoyed the babie part... well done!..:)
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