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Alone Together

Alone together Seaside moments float atop a silent surf as whispers call from lonely tides glistening in star shaped wishes and sandcastle dreams… while our footprints, two by two create patterns of love, woven white sand smiles in heartbeat wanderings, following us into the night… as we slowly stroll beneath a marigold moon, along this wind swept beach of seashell harmonies and palm tree silhouettes… alone together Good night Soupers

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Kathleen Sharpe

Date: 5/17/2020 11:09:00 PM

Hello, I am a singer-songwriter and I set this poem to music, I would like to send you a recording of the song!

Chris Green
Date: 6/19/2020 7:17:00 AM

Trying once more to reach out. I would love to hear the song

Chris Green
Date: 5/19/2020 8:45:00 AM

Good morning Kathleen. I sent you a message this morning.

Kathleen Sharpe
Date: 5/17/2020 11:10:00 PM

is there a way I can get in touch with you? thank you.

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 6/26/2017 11:28:00 PM

Hi Chris!:))Very beautifully written romantic, sweet and passionate, good night love poem Chris:)All just beautiful!Awesome!I truly enjoy it all! A 7 + + ! A fav too. For sure I'll continue reading more of your very beautiful poetry and (hearing) music, my friend Chris:))Wishing you a very lovely week! In his light God bless you always!:)) D

Chris Green
Date: 6/27/2017 9:43:00 AM

Thank you so very much my friend. I am happy you liked this poem. I appreciate your kindness.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 5/16/2017 3:21:00 PM

I agree w/Lenna, you're the king of romance, Chris. A beautiful, restive poem. So tranquil and serene. Keep walking those beach nights w/your baby. Pure romantic poetry. Love always.

Chris Green
Date: 5/16/2017 4:07:00 PM

Thanks so much Freddie. I appreciate your visit.

Lenna Walker

Date: 5/10/2017 10:21:00 AM

Well, I could repeat all they have said but I believe many are in agreement as to you being the king of romance Chris. Very romantic, and yes, that "marigold moon" ... lovely :)

Chris Green
Date: 5/10/2017 10:24:00 AM

Thank you Lenna for always being so nice to me. I appreciate your kind words and your friendship.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/9/2017 12:50:00 PM

I so love palm trees..and tropical sands...Love your Marigold moon..its kind of special...And those footprints making love patterns..deserve some tea-light candles :)...Awesome ...Love yr romantic posts Chris.

Chris Green
Date: 5/9/2017 1:44:00 PM

I was hoping you would like this one my sweet friend. I thought it might make you smile and I am happy to see it did. Your kindness is always my smile Charmaine.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/9/2017 3:42:00 AM

And all is right with the world and within the world of two special people. This is gorgeously poetic. Read back your words and you will see why. Follow the marigold moon. Have a wonderful morning and day. Well done completely.

Chris Green
Date: 5/9/2017 8:30:00 AM

Thank you so very much my friend for always being so nice to me. I am happy you stopped by and thrilled you enjoyed this poem. Your comments always makes me smile Lisa.