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Alone In a Crowd

In the crowd he is lonely, empty faces pass on the street. He yearns to smell the perfume of want and the heady taste of fulfillment. In the bus he is the only passenger, He rides to the end of the line and back, looking for a heart and a home.. and recognition… see my face. The grass is wet beneath his feet… He walks from here to there and finds a way back. Looking for a light to show the way to a door that opens with his approach. The streets are full but always empty. Only the wind hears his petition. Perhaps fate was written on pages from a book written in the sand.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/5/2009 1:32:00 PM
Dear BARBEEG, I can relate to this POEM as I live on top of a mountain miles away from people I think this is a great POEM, truthful for many ThankYOU for sharing My Heart is YOURS ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 2/16/2009 3:24:00 PM
Been down that lonely road a time or two myself. Great write and thanks for commenting on my work also.
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Date: 2/13/2009 10:05:00 AM
Barbara, it takes a great poet to realize "The streets are full but always empty." Thank you for sharing - Carolyn
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Date: 2/8/2009 9:13:00 PM
Beautifully written but so sad how even in a crowd how alone we can feel. Great piece, Barbara. Love, Robin
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Date: 2/7/2009 8:44:00 AM
had to put this in my favs, reminds me of something deep. Loved this poetry and also loved your words, you have more replys than this. enjoy your day.
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Date: 2/6/2009 8:18:00 PM
Ah, so true for many. I know I've felt that way before myself. It's a sad feeling. Very good write
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Date: 2/6/2009 6:24:00 PM
Barbara - sadly this is truly the fate of many - Very Profound piece - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/6/2009 3:21:00 AM
Great piece , Barbara , contrasting the busy world with feeling all alone . I'm sure we have all felt that way , on some occasion .... Tks for your kind words .... Sean .
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Date: 2/6/2009 2:43:00 AM
Nice work BG, I have felt alone in a crowd a time or two but nothing permanent. It's always a joy to read your work, keep at it...Raul
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