Alone At the Top

How empty I feel as I gaze outside
from a penthouse suite, so grand
a prisoner chained, this lofty building
weighs me down on the ground where I stand.

I remember those yesterdays long, long ago
where in freedom, I'd run, laugh and play
I'd ride on my horse on the wild, open plains
now I'm trapped at my desk every day.

In those years as I grew, I came to consider
a future beyond my quaint humble town
to the city I went, with idealist intentions
to prove greater dreams could be found.

Yet here now I stand, with my dreams in my hands
and I'm empty, as empty could be
how desperate I feel, I'd give all to be real
to again ride my horse and break free. 





Written on 3/12/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dietrich Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 8:12 PM
I see you won. Congratulations, Laura. As for my poem in this contest, it was only partially true. I did meet my husband at my apartment building and it was love at first sight for me. He was so handsome and kind of cowboy looking. The rest of that poem I made up!!
Haight Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 7:30 PM
Such lovely imagery in your beautiful poem, that included good use of the required words, Laura. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Leiser Avatar
March 19, 2018 at 3:17 PM
Thanks, Sandra :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 1:07 AM
Congratulations, Laura on your fine win with a nice poem on bane of modern times.
Leiser Avatar
March 19, 2018 at 3:15 PM
Thank you, Subimal :)
Barden Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 11:43 PM
Love this write and I adore horses, (especially Arabians - I know the owner of the largest stables in the world - Godolphin, he's the Emir of Dubai, who I sometimes work for). My gf in prep school had a horse and I fell in love ... with the horse, lol! Sincere congratulations on your well-deserved win, Laura - blessings, and keep up the great work, friend! :-) <3
Leiser Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 1:02 PM
Horses are beautiful creatures, for sure! I haven't ridden one in years, but it was always a treat when I did! Glad you enjoyed this simple poem :)
Roper Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 9:49 PM
love the imagery you created in this verse.. the longing to be out in nature feeling the wind on your face as you rode your horse. Laura, congratulations on the contest! I also wanted to thank you for the wonderful encouraging compliment on the contest. it really means a lot … hugs Eve ~`*
Leiser Avatar
March 19, 2018 at 3:18 PM
Thanks so much, Eve! So glad you enjoyed this one :)
Wigley Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 9:03 PM
Well done, Laura! Viv x
Leiser Avatar
March 19, 2018 at 3:17 PM
Thank you, Viv :)
Gauthier Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 4:10 PM
Awesome poem, Laura. We can so relate. Beautifully expressed feelings of longing and nostalgia and what's-it-all-for. Superbly done. Congrats.
Leiser Avatar
March 19, 2018 at 3:16 PM
Thank you, Line! So glad you enjoyed this one :)
Poteet Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 2:08 PM
Great theme, just enough rhyme, and strong emotions displayed throughout. You did well, and a hearty hurrah on your placement. You deserve a trip back home to the plains.
Leiser Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 1:03 PM
Hi Reason! I made this story up, but I think many can relate to it. Glad you enjoyed my poem :)
Canerdy Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 1:56 PM
I REALLY like this, Laura. CONGRATS on your win. Our poems convey basically the same theme! Janice
Wigley Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 2:55 AM
Lovely write, Laura, and I can empathise completely. Viv x
One Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 2:40 PM
A great idea for the contest, it normally is lonely at the top, that is why I prefer to stay in the middle... This is a deep emotive poem with the first stanza creating the scene for the poem perfectly... God luck in the contest Laura..
Leiser Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 10:04 PM
Thank you, Silent! I'm glad you liked this one...it came to me quite quickly. :)
Pandit Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 5:56 AM
An awesome creation...so well written, Laura! If this doesn't win, I would be surprised!!
Leiser Avatar
March 19, 2018 at 3:17 PM
Thank you, Vijay! Glad you enjoyed this poem :)
Turner Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 11:36 PM
This is a wonderful poem, Laura. It flows very well and left a huge grin on my face.
Leiser Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 10:06 PM
Thanks, Daniel! Glad you liked this one :)
Ashley Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 9:38 PM
Such a beautifully wistful write Laura. Enthralling and enchanting, I was captivated by every poetic line and the required words melted seamlessly into the beauty of your poem. I loved the yearning emotions of your lovely poem. Best wishes for a win!
Leiser Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 10:04 PM
Thank you, Susan! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem :)
Dietrich Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 6:28 PM
YOu did splendidly with the given words. I too just finished mine recently. Fingers crossed for both of us!
Leiser Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 10:06 PM
Thanks, Andrea! I read yours, as well...is it true to life ?! Good luck in the contest :)
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