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The Christmas tree stands alone But still decorated with lights glowing The family has come and gone A misty tear drop with a quiet groan Remembering the days when they were home The Christmas tree stands alone Wanting little ones to come and crawl in zone Of the blanket, packages, and decorations The family has come and gone Leftover food, torn wrap, lights that shone Guiding them to this warm old home The Christmas tree stands alone Dirty dishes, soiled placemats, candles blown Still longing for them at home The family has come and gone Time passes, situations change The love in my heart remains the same The Christmas tree stands alone The family has come and gone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/2/2010 3:40:00 AM
Most of us know that feeling. Nice write.
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Date: 12/22/2009 8:00:00 PM
sad yet beautiful piece. great write
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Date: 12/22/2009 4:58:00 PM
sad, you want what you don't have
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Date: 12/22/2009 1:45:00 PM
This is sad and beautiful, let me brush a tear away. I would love to return to a Christmas such as you describe, diry dishes and all...for I stand alone...just like that Christmas tree... and thanks for your comment on my poem, every once in awhile, as for black squirrls, we have plenty here in Canada, and brown, and grey ..lots of variety...
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Date: 12/22/2009 8:59:00 AM
I feel for u in this one Sara.. but so beautifully penned.. I keep my tree up all year round to keep that same spirit as the holiday brings with family and friends around happily... thankxxx ..this is a beautiful write... blessings... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 12/22/2009 4:44:00 AM
Pretty much sums it up, when the little ones grow up....Seems like the family gatherings sort of dry up... Nicely penned as always Sara....Thanks for all your kind comments on my work.....Taz
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Date: 12/21/2009 8:32:00 PM
no one should be alone around holidays.it's depressing.nice write -Lynette
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Date: 12/21/2009 5:35:00 PM
Nice form Sara, and such a sentiment from my own heart as well. Life does change, but repeats itself, over and over. Happy Holidays Jeralynn
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Date: 12/21/2009 4:02:00 PM
It is a lonesome time when th family has gone. For a brief time it seems we are together for holidays, but there will be another day when all thing will be together as one forever. Sincerely, Love, Moses
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Date: 12/21/2009 2:35:00 PM
Sara, this is a lovely poem which will relate to many many families >> James
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Date: 12/21/2009 11:03:00 AM
A wonderful write you have penned here Sara...can feel the emotions emanating from every word. Thanks so much for sharing. Many thanks too for your taking the time to read my writes and your kind comments are always appreciated! Have a blessed day~Mary
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Date: 12/21/2009 10:35:00 AM
Out of that moment of finality comes the emptiness that begs the cycle repeat ... and only you could make it so magical and still real.
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Date: 12/21/2009 7:39:00 AM
I can feel this poem in my heart, as a parent and grandparent. We become used to this quiet house, until they have come home again...but it seems too quiet when they leave. Merry Christmas, Sara! ~ Love, Carrie
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