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Heartbroken

Though surrounded with love I am alone, since that tragic day in my childhood life; I watched my sister die with a last moan, the horror stabbed my heart with a sharp knife. I went silent from that day, I withdrew, soon, I spoke but was shattered in my mind; often I feel put together with glue. in time my sadness and my words entwined. And a poet was born out of great grief, like a boat forgotten and weather-stained; I have floated far and wide like a leaf, ruined- with a beauty hard to explain. Heard a poet must suffer to write well; so, no wonder to this fate- I have fell. ______________________________ May 12, 2019 Poetry/Sonnet/Heartbroken Copyright Protected, 19-1190-215-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to FTI Blog Series 4 - Feelings Brian Strand, Theme, loneliness, grief Podium Place 2 ______________________________ Submitted to the contest, 2019 Best Sonnet sponsor, John Hamilton Third Place

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Date: 1/2/2020 11:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in John Hamilton, Best Sonnet Contest. Hugs Eve
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Constance La France
Date: 1/3/2020 1:51:00 PM
Eve, thanks so much for the congratulations and hugs !
Date: 1/1/2020 1:27:00 PM
Congrats Constance on a great third place win!
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Constance La France
Date: 1/1/2020 4:50:00 PM
John, thanks for another wonderful contest and for my placement, appreciate !
Date: 10/21/2019 4:59:00 PM
If true my heart goes out to you. If not thank you for writing it for I had a similar experience as a child. :)
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Constance La France
Date: 10/21/2019 5:29:00 PM
Timothy, thank you for your compassion, my words are true and have stayed with me all my life but also have helped me be a poet, sorry you went through something similar, it scars a child for life !
Date: 10/21/2019 1:57:00 PM
Very powerful and poignant, Constance. ~Mark
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Constance La France
Date: 10/21/2019 4:14:00 PM
Mark, written from my heart and soul, thanks for the compliment !

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