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Almost Spring

folding the trees, branch by branch; rolling the leaves. slender sticks play eye tricks; fat and juicy ones’ carried downwards. small branches gathered; large ones, heave ho. these matchsticks aren’t lit, and I don’t know how my small forest thrives …and then a sound an engine near, grinding through my Winter lookout, across the way, creating empty space for kids to safely play. the trees are stressed; and relieved as the roaring stops at the edge. on edge they want to dress their best, in Spring’s verdancy - it seems an emergency to get on with it; buds will show up after the tempest, for survival of the fittest, at least that’s the way the wind blows now …then silence.

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Date: 3/16/2025 1:34:00 AM
Spring is joyfully anticipated by everyone when trees once more come alive with a canopy of leaves. Your descriptions are unique, dear Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/16/2025 5:34:00 AM
Thank you, Valsa!
Date: 3/14/2025 5:37:00 PM
You describe Spring so well, a quiet respect for your ending... <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/14/2025 8:37:00 PM
Thank you, Paige!
Date: 3/14/2025 8:03:00 AM
Kim, you are a very creative writer! This one sings notes of Spring!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/14/2025 11:25:00 AM
Thank you, Mark! :)
Date: 3/14/2025 7:10:00 AM
- Great, Kim ...let spring come...with sunshine and joy :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/14/2025 11:26:00 AM
Not looking forward to the insects but I need sun, flowers, full trees, warmth, etc… Hugs

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