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All These Years

Calm comes with still waters bringing me reflective memories of you Those visions filled with laughter to erase the pain of sudden deep loss When I never tossed the stone, yet it sank so deeply down, out of sight Calm is the quiet evening filled with the last birds singing goodnight Hidden in this tranquil circling of mountains, hugging the setting sun All this, just in time for me to dream of you once again, once again Calm is the open peaceful field that I remember running through, Holding hands in the tall blades of grass, blowing in soft moving waves I still feel your hand and I feel the warmth of the serene golden hue Shining upon me, after all of these years living on earth without you Heidi Sands 5/12/21

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Date: 5/16/2021 10:59:00 AM
Memories are kept in one's heart forever, they can never be erased as the mind also remembers. I truly enjoyed what you wrote above my friend. Peace and calm be with you always. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/16/2021 11:55:00 AM
Yes, they are kept in one's heart forever. Thank you very much Jennifer. Hugs and blessings to you too :)
Date: 5/16/2021 6:22:00 AM
Memories that are cherished when a friend is taken too soon, Poignant write Heidi, is this for contest
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/16/2021 6:38:00 AM
Thank you very much Joseph. Yes, the memories are cherished for sure. It was for the contest, but I had removed it when I didn't have time to edit it. I hope you have a nice day :)
Date: 5/15/2021 7:28:00 PM
Beautiful... the imagery was perfect. Ann
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/16/2021 5:16:00 AM
Thank you Ann. I appreciate your support :)
Date: 5/14/2021 9:09:00 PM
Heidi, A dear heart coming into focus. Words I would see happier, though they belong only to you. The ripples go on and on. -Richard
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/15/2021 5:48:00 AM
There are many happy memories to reflect upon. Thank you for your comment Richard. I appreciate your support. I hope you have a nice day :)
Date: 5/13/2021 9:38:00 PM
Sadly beautiful. Love your work. Good luck in the contest
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/14/2021 5:06:00 AM
Thank you very much White Wolf :)
Date: 5/13/2021 4:40:00 AM
So beautifully you've woven the serenity through the piece while simultaneously creating a very moving poem. Lovely to read Heidi !! Good luck in the contest! Happy Thursday xxoo
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/13/2021 4:58:00 AM
Thank you Mike. Happy Thursday! xxoo
Date: 5/12/2021 3:15:00 PM
Heartfelt ode to memories of the beloved you wrote, Heidi. We never forget them.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/12/2021 3:23:00 PM
Thank you Vijay. Nice to see your comment. I hope all is well :)
Date: 5/12/2021 1:20:00 PM
This is an exceptional poem Heidi, contest or no contest:) reads like a winner!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/12/2021 1:37:00 PM
Thank you DT. That is nice to hear. I hope all is well and you have a nice evening :)

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