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All Is Not Lost

If I should grow so old that I Forget my name, beloved faces, Disremember who I am and Get lost in familiar places, Then I would be sad and confused, I’m sure I would be lonely too; Yet Lord above, my truest Friend, I know I’d still remember You. The saddest person I envision, Whom ever on this earth has trod, Must be the one with mind so dulled, He has forgotten the true God. When pleasures of this life are through, Dear God, my God, I’ll still have you. Won a second in Brian's contest

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Date: 7/3/2011 11:34:00 AM
such depth, joyce...miles of congrats on a well deserved award! :)huggs!
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Date: 7/2/2011 11:10:00 PM
Great devotion shown for our precious Father.Very good.
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Date: 7/2/2011 9:48:00 AM
wow.. This is deep... I like how you devote yourself to God in this poem :). N thanks for your nice comments.. congrats too! :)
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Date: 7/1/2011 11:34:00 AM
yes congratulations on your win, a great piece you wrote. thank you for commenting on yellow rose.
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Date: 7/1/2011 10:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "A Choice Of Form" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/1/2011 4:19:00 AM
Congrats Joyce on another great win in second place with this delicate and lovely entry my friend..luv..
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Date: 6/30/2011 6:05:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Joyce. I will be back again soon to read more. Hoping you find your soul filled with inspiration today and everyday and may your writing endeavors come to be. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/29/2011 8:35:00 PM
Thumbs way way UP! I really like this one! Wise and wonderfully put. PUT A SASE ON THIS AND SEND 'ER OUT! Hugs, CYndi
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Date: 6/29/2011 7:04:00 PM
Joyce this piece is so powerful and so intense my friend.. lovely description of dread mental loss of recognition.. but who can forget God? even in that state of mind the spirit is on fire ..excellent and beyond luv.. to view Brian's winners lists usually pages 9 or 10 .. his blogs usually inform us..luv..
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Date: 6/29/2011 5:12:00 PM
I so totally agree, Joyce, God never leaves us, I think he had his hand in getting my computer back from the dead too, thanks for all your inspiring comments on my poetry ~~
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