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Ahoy Susan

( To a fellow local poet, Susan Booth, who is taking a sabbatical) Blank page or white screen champing at the bit, both restless for the whip of pen or key mind struggling for a word or phrase that fit the image that the inner self can see. Sometimes one finds the pitcher leaves the well with nothing to inspire, no flame, no growth, on other days it seems one is on fire, the mind alive, the soul, or sometimes both. A poet's voyage often is alone so fellow wordsmiths are a welcome sight, the flags they fly different in style and tone their cargo thoughts, emotions or delight. Set sail soon, your Muse dictates your tack, where we in safe harbour welcome you back.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/27/2017 6:03:00 PM
Love this, Viv, and long time no see!! The title is clever for your friend and the metaphors are awesome.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 10/1/2017 1:27:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea, I've been a bit 'ship in the night' myself recently. Hope you're all well. Viv x
Date: 9/24/2017 5:54:00 AM
Sounds like me, Viv: My Muse is still hiding because I have no time to heed her. Maybe soon I will knuckle down and start penning some lines. Hope to hear from you when you are around, Hugs, SuZ
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Viv Wigley
Date: 9/26/2017 11:41:00 PM
Thanks Suz, precious little time nowadays to sit and write, but will drop by when I can. Hope you're well , Viv x
Date: 9/18/2017 10:00:00 AM
Viv, lovely words to someone who is obviously missed.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 9/26/2017 11:41:00 PM
Thanks, James, hope you're doin' ok. Regards, Viv
Date: 9/12/2017 6:26:00 PM
Good sonnet, Viv. Janice
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Viv Wigley
Date: 9/26/2017 11:42:00 PM
Thanks, Janice x
Date: 9/10/2017 9:49:00 AM
You were on fire with this Viv.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 9/26/2017 11:42:00 PM
Unusual, Jean, most of the time I feel put out.... hope you're doing lovely. Viv x
Date: 8/31/2017 8:20:00 AM
Beautiful sonnet of inspiration, Viv, hope this brings back Susan:)
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Date: 8/31/2017 2:53:00 AM
Master of Sonnet, your Muse dictates you wonderful deep and enjoyable verses who will conquer the world.. I saw the cargo thoughts, emotion and delight flowing well. Publishing houses will wait for your acceptance in the safe harbour.Best regards and wishes.
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