Ahoy Susan

( To a fellow local poet, Susan Booth, who is taking a sabbatical)

Blank page or white screen champing at the bit,
both restless for the whip of pen or key
mind struggling for a word or phrase that fit
the image that the inner self can see.
Sometimes one finds the pitcher leaves the well
with nothing to inspire, no flame, no growth,
on other days it seems one is on fire,
the mind alive, the soul, or sometimes both.
A poet's voyage often is alone
so fellow wordsmiths are a welcome sight,
the flags they fly different in style and tone
their cargo thoughts, emotions or delight.
Set sail soon, your Muse dictates your tack,
where we in safe harbour welcome you back.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Dietrich Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 6:03 PM
Love this, Viv, and long time no see!! The title is clever for your friend and the metaphors are awesome.
Wigley Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 1:27 AM
Thanks, Andrea, I've been a bit 'ship in the night' myself recently. Hope you're all well. Viv x
Delaney Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 5:54 AM
Sounds like me, Viv: My Muse is still hiding because I have no time to heed her. Maybe soon I will knuckle down and start penning some lines. Hope to hear from you when you are around, Hugs, SuZ
Wigley Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 11:41 PM
Thanks Suz, precious little time nowadays to sit and write, but will drop by when I can. Hope you're well , Viv x
Inman Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 10:00 AM
Viv, lovely words to someone who is obviously missed.
Wigley Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 11:41 PM
Thanks, James, hope you're doin' ok. Regards, Viv
Canerdy Avatar
September 12, 2017 at 6:26 PM
Good sonnet, Viv. Janice
Wigley Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 11:42 PM
Thanks, Janice x
Murray Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 9:49 AM
You were on fire with this Viv.
Wigley Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 11:42 PM
Unusual, Jean, most of the time I feel put out.... hope you're doing lovely. Viv x
Daniel Avatar
August 31, 2017 at 8:20 AM
Beautiful sonnet of inspiration, Viv, hope this brings back Susan:)
Bocsa Avatar
August 31, 2017 at 2:53 AM
Master of Sonnet, your Muse dictates you wonderful deep and enjoyable verses who will conquer the world.. I saw the cargo thoughts, emotion and delight flowing well. Publishing houses will wait for your acceptance in the safe harbour.Best regards and wishes.
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